Rb

I'm Taking You Beyond The Grave...Im A Rave The Critics Crave,
I'm Darker Than A Cave...You Can Scream But You Won't Be Saved
This Kid Can't Think...His Minds In A Lock,
I'm Ending You On The Writers Be-Heading Block!
Definantly Your Word Is Absurd And The Worst I've ever Heard,
Lirael One Will Be Your 2nd Loss...And I'll Be Your Third
No Need To Take You Down And Break Your Crown,
Come On Put On A Smile Instead Of A Frown
I'll Leave You Looking Like The Salad That Ya Toss,
The Only Definate About You...Is This Loss!

No need for break down becuase i would end up sayin the same thing...it sounded like a poem or an open mic. punches werent that good and you had no complex anything. no wordplay, metas werent the greatest, personals i dont think you had any. you need to elevate or stop battlin and go all openmic and poem


WD

Rocks hit bottom harder than the angriest homo,
n couldnt take this heavyweight if his class was sumo
Hey Rock, Bottoms up, a toast to my new win,
I could never stop flowin if I was anymore fluent
You couldnt be in deeper water if you were spongebob squarepants,
n like carnival games, you still never really had a fair chance
Rockin bottoms where ill leave u lyin on the charts,
n you couldn't pushed rapped goods with grocery carts
my battles are like the mumbles the way that i got UMMMM,
n not even a mime in a hole would ever feel rock bottom


your verse wasnt the greatest either, but your punches did hit harder then Rb's. you had meh wordplay and some lame stuff, you need to elevate. how ever you did win this battle becuase Rb didnt throw one ok punch

my vote - WD for reasons stated above

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somebody forgot to poll vote....DAMNIT...one more vote somebody

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