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VOTE= BIGG DZ

PEST UR VERSE JUST LOST ME. IT SEEMED AS IF U WERE JUST PUTTING WORDS 2GETHER WITHOUT EVEN THINKING. UR PUNCHES DIDN'T EVER REALLY CONNECT FOR THE HARD HIT. ALTHOUGH I FELT BOTH VERSES COULD'VE BEEN BETTER WITH A LITTLE MORE EFFORT I FELT BIGG JUST HAD MORE PUNCHES THAT CONNECTED AND RHYME SCHEME WAS BETTER.

FAV BIGG LINES:"if you could you wouldn't even fucc with a BIGG DOGG..
your STEPPin' with PUPPY FEET I'm WALKIN' WITH BIGG PAWS.

4-2 uppin

uppin for votes!!
almost done

4 - 2 uppin votes already

try'n to get this one over PLEEEEASSSSE!

uppin...

Yo i'm editing this vote cause i didn't effectivly ACTUALLY read
the eniterty of the battle
so let's get started:

Pest's Verse

ima bout to hit you wit more Barz than tha lenth of your name//
and the'll be more deadly than you sniffin anthrax grains//

{this was an ight intro}

my skills are fully trained your just a disgrase~ a waste//
you just dead weight so please leave tha human race//

{This was a decent personal}

like they say leave your feelings at tha front door//
and you must of dawg cause I aint Feelin you at all

hahah nice lil personal right here}

you just a lost cause cause tha only thing you can hit is yo blo doll//
we can go back and forth in this battle like a see-saw//
{nice lil word play here+ decent personal}


but if we do then pest C-4 gonna go up and blow up nothin but yo fuckin toes off//
so then I can truly saw tha I DEfeeted bigg 40 Cal//
{Didn't like this finisher but is was a ight verse all together}

40Cal's Verse

pest, drops shit like pigeons small and WEAK...
with that WHITE SHIT on tha side of his mouth when he SPEAKS
{nice intro here very effective word-play and punch}

as matter fact you shouldnt even SPEAK AT ALL...
like tha BITCHES I Be keepin when THE EVENING FALLS
{ nice personal here}

YOU NEED SOME BALLS.. so whe YOU NEED JUST CALL...
and I'll be there with my TESTOSTERONE SEEDS and ALL
{nice personal here felt that 1}

could you'd SEE... how my TEXT is in your ass cuz I know you CAN'T READ
{nice punch here mixed wit a lil personal}

if you could you wouldn't even fucc with a BIGG DOGG..
your STEPPin' with PUPPY FEET I'm WALKIN' WITH BIGG PAWS{nice word play here}

I'll CUT YOU like a JIGSAW, SMALL LITTLE PIECES...
I GOT THE PEST PUZZLED HOPIN' HE DONT FALL THRU THE CREASES
{very nice finisher very effective}

I Voted Earlier 4 Pest but that's cuz i didn't read the verse
entirly
but my vote now goes to 40Cal
simple fact it flowed smoothly and the personals came out more effective
and the punches hit harder

Psy verse smoothed nicely you has your couple of highlights
here and there but 40 came out more effectove

Vote=40Cal

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G.I. JOE

what's a good lyric if you can't picture it being heard in audio!

thats where RAP STARTED! AUDIO! STREET CORNERS! PEOPLE FREESTYLIN ( ON BEAT ). NOT LYK HALF THESE LAME ASS so called Lyricists.

thx for the vote anyway PIMPER!

good lookin out! 4-3

uppin..

doga what i meant b4 was that this text shit is diff from audio
and i hear what u sayin we these lame so called lyricists
i said that cuz alot of these so called vets criticize me
for sounding "too Audio"
don't know what if fukin means either
but num sayin it's diff
blah my 2 in change
Oh and
40cal
change the votes you won
5-2 i think

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G.I. JOE

thnx $1000 for being honest.

BUT DONT LET THESE HATIN SECRATARIES down your skillz.
I know I wont.
RAP IS WHAT IT IS RAP! IF YOU CAN'T RHYME ON TIME YOU'RE JUST A FUCKIN POET! nuthin against poetry. BUT THESE ARE RAP BATTLES. so battle it out.

and as for PESTILENCE sorry pimper 5-2

I WIN.

GONE...