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Old 05-26-04, 08:57 AM   #18
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yeah overall that was the ill shit

hottest line:
since obviously BABYLON played a big part in the slaying of Jesus Christ//
from the ages of eden to the latest with heethins, he's been deceasin' your breathin' rites//

-this line right here, its in a completely different league, your linguistic peak right chea, keep every line @ this level and your getting a deal for sure

weakest line:
ECKO gets his name for a reason, believe this...its like once he gives you a beatin'//
your recievin' a second and third this evenin' like it was in sequence//

-obviously it might sound better when your flowin it but to be honest with you i can see you drop tighter rhymes within the same track so personally i'd work on that part

overall though it was definatly hot, props to you and im sure your crew shown you love for a tune that hot. keep up da good
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Old 05-26-04, 10:52 PM   #19
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thank you for the feedback my man.

uuuppppppiiinnn'''!!!

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Old 05-28-04, 06:14 AM   #20
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omg that is the hottest shit i have read on this site in mad long you had mulits personals that shit was fucking hot flow was there you had everything of a great song right there in that shit ma nkeep doin shit like that
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Old 05-28-04, 09:37 AM   #21
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trapt rage u r a fukin idiot u aint even got a win or any ligit posts so get the fuk out of here u aint worth this forum let me upp this shyt for yall......
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Old 05-28-04, 07:12 PM   #22
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uppinnn for my homie S.V.
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Old 05-28-04, 09:57 PM   #23
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SIIIIIICKKKKK shit west coast homey... its spits like this that make me wanna join yo crew. I'm handlin some battles right now to show you cats so that ya'll migght let me in. But absolute fire i feel how you broke down each of yo crew members. From this spit it sounds like ya'll run shit... i want in...1
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Old 05-28-04, 10:43 PM   #24
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That was some hot ass shiiiiiiiiit!!!!!!! Once you get into it it flows well and I like how u give an intro to all the cryme members!!!!
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Old 05-29-04, 01:49 AM   #25
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^^^^^im all smiles. thank you.


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Old 05-30-04, 09:53 AM   #26
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that wuz sweet ass once u got into it and saw how it flowed like that, and i like the cryme memba intros, rite on man
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Old 05-31-04, 03:27 AM   #27
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thank you much fellow battlecats. uppin'.

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