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01-27-06, 03:16 PM | #16 | |||||
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aight feelin da hook dat shits hard da beat overall is str8 i fucks wit it...lyricz is coo...flows str8...deliverys aiight..not really feelin ya voice tho i dunno...but dis hook is hot man whoeva dat is singin did it up...overall dis tracks solid...
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01-29-06, 01:49 AM | #17 | ||||||
Power Hungry
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IP: B94A EB13
im likin the beat
ooooooh gooood I am SO sorry, but I do NOT like love songs like the content, cos I think love stinks but, Imma judge this on flow, and addlibs and shit like that the delivery is nice addlibs are a lil bit too high. flow messes up a LITTLE ITSY WITSY tiny bit, son I like this girl's singin what are you? like what nationality? cos you dont sound black, and you dont sound white you sound...ionno but you pronounce shit differently, not a bad thing at all, its just somethin I noticed the 2nd verse damn, you prolly should've made the 2nd verse your 1st verse just the way you start it off quality was a bit below average if the quality was stepped up, this could be sort of a hit. lile in your area and shit but word @ a Valentine's day track, man. I SHOULD make one, but ionno anyway, man, this shit wasnt bad at all, a few faults that can be fixed as you get more into audio. Im assumin you're just now startin out. but word yeah what was I about to say!?
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