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01-02-04, 11:04 AM
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IP: 280D E6BB
LOL your drop wasn't bad though... I was feelin it
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01-02-04, 11:07 AM
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HMMMM NOT BAD AT ALL...still stayin short n snappy
spit!!!!! BREAKDOWN---**oh oh oh..dont stop-HAMMER TIME!! punches-Spit flow-spit complexity-Bio sustainment-spit enjoyment-both metas-spit structure-spit overall-Spit clear to see here that he jus put more effort in and that tight structure gave a good flow pz MAKE SURE YA'LL HIT THIS UP PLZ..BEING MAD SLEPT ON PZ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102236
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01-02-04, 12:11 PM
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You talkin to me?
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IP: 280D E6BB
uppin............................................. .for tha finisher
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01-02-04, 12:56 PM
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5th uppin..................................
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01-02-04, 01:19 PM
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ur both in one of my crews...lol....so i'll vote....Bio ur first two lines were the best....the rest just flowed off and u went into that paragraph type structure....try using more up to date wordplay and punches.....personals are also nice to use....the pic line was a good personal.....but ur follow up wasn't that hard...and try ending each line with a rhyme....like u did in ur first two lines.....Spit had a harder hitting verse....and a few good personals....no hate to either of u though....here's a breakdown
BREAKDOWN Multis - Spit Metas - Tie Wordplay - Tie Punches - Spit Flow - Spit Structure - Spit Personals - Tie RhymeScheme - Spit Overall - if Bio focuses on fixing his structure and throwing harder punches/personals with updated wordplay this would've been a much closer battle.....but Spit takes it mostly just for having harder punches....no hate to either of u though.....good read...just a vote peace
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