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10-17-07, 11:58 AM | #16 | |||||
A Life Of Chryme
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IP: BB99 9931
i was kidding about the whole suicidal thing of course...but seriously idc about wining and loosing.
i just care about sweaty pits.
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10-17-07, 06:03 PM | #17 | ||||
Free Agent
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IP: 9DB6 FE91
Mystic, you had a personal punch but I felt that the world choice that you picked wasn't very creative. However, the 1st line connected to the 2nd line very well...
DJ-SYDM, the wordplay & creativity was done a little better. Even though the concept has been used before, you executed the punch better.. Vote - DJ-Sydm
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10-17-07, 10:10 PM | #18 | |||||
A Life Of Chryme
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IP: 17A3 8BF2
thanks for the feed and vote.
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10-18-07, 01:56 AM | #19 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 6A4F 37C6
nice punch dj that was one of the best so far
mystic yours was forced like you rushed it and aint read it back to yourself vote- DJ
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10-18-07, 08:57 AM | #20 | ||||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 9A30 43B3
I wont even ASK.Y you rap, cuz ya shits extinct like a MAMOUTH
Matta fact,DJ how bout you listen ta ya own name .................................................. .............and SHUT YO' DAMN MOUTH! 1st line: flow aight and decent set up.. sorda a punch to as-well... 2ed line: aight flow.. a bit personal but lacking impack on the punch and sorda force as-well mamouth and danm mouth dont really flow good but then again every punch dont have to rhyme as-long as it connects good which this one didnt really connect that good... Mys' can't stic a punch, Nobody wants to see me in a 'bout with him' cause if he lasts more than a second its cause the ref had to count to 10! 1st line: a bit of word-play and a aight flow decent set up... 2ed line: flow aight a bit more creative and decent punch not the hardest punch but a decent one that hit harder... winner: dj |
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10-18-07, 12:43 PM | #21 | |||||
A Life Of Chryme
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IP: BB99 9931
thnx...........................
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10-19-07, 12:59 PM | #22 | |||||||
Adam
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IP: 5374 C987
Vote: DJ
/Mystic biting my Ask Y idea = gay. Quote:
Word. |
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10-19-07, 01:38 PM | #23 | |||
сварливый
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IP: 30B6 8894
Meh, who cares, shit was filler
lol
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10-19-07, 02:13 PM | #24 | ||||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 9A30 43B3
it was sorda the same concept but it wasnt the whole bar itself so its not concider biting but a lack of creativeness...
either way he still lost thou.... |
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10-19-07, 02:13 PM | #25 | ||||||
Adam
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IP: 5374 C987
Word, mine was better. :coo:
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10-19-07, 02:16 PM | #26 | ||||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 9A30 43B3
^^ word...... way better.....
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10-19-07, 09:09 PM | #27 | |||
I Hurt.
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IP: 68E6 0E27
Mystic, just wasn't feelin' urs, felt like the wit wasn't there. DJ's was nice, he got this one.
Vote - DJ |
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10-19-07, 09:12 PM | #28 | |||||
in your system
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IP: 5374 C987
v/ DJ... mystics punch was too simple, dj's was decent, not really hard hitting, but mys had nothing, so
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10-19-07, 10:57 PM | #29 | |||||
A Life Of Chryme
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IP: 17A3 8BF2
i did use the same concept, but it wasn't the focus of my punch. it was used in diff. terms. and f.oo we were supposed to be lovers.
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10-19-07, 11:51 PM | #30 | |||||||
The Original Half Ass King
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IP: D97E 406D
I felt that mystics was forced and not really hittin that hard, but good attempt. You prolly coulda done things a bit differently to make it more effective. eg. not rhyming with MAMOUTH. ...iunno, thats just my 2 cents anyways.
DJ, yours was straight up witty as fuck and made me laugh. Nice flow. v/DJ...... |
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