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Old 10-05-09, 03:29 PM   #16
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So if you write a story and say "I walked into my room and saw my dog eating chicken!"

You probably meant to say that you saw your dog, eating some chicken. As a chicken that can eat a dog doesn't make sense. And sure everyone will get what you're trying to say, but you'll still get a nice X beside that phrase from your english teacher.

Wait.... you never went to college did you?

Ummm... did you graduate highschool?

Looks like your brain isnt as complex as you think it is
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Old 10-05-09, 08:26 PM   #17
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thats the thing

Man-eating shark. This is a shark eating a man

Man, eating shark. This is a man eating a shark

Man eating shark. Which is this?
same as above,u dont necessarily need the comma
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Old 10-05-09, 08:43 PM   #18
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Haha some of the shit you come up with is great..
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Old 10-05-09, 08:43 PM   #19
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no that's wrong haha... you do need the comma

man eating shark and man-eating shark is the same

man, eating shark is the different one.. i learnt this in liberal arts
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Old 10-05-09, 08:46 PM   #20
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Indeed, you are wrong my friend.

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Old 10-05-09, 09:04 PM   #21
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"a man-eating shark" is a carnivorous fish.
and "a man eating shark" is a male human in the active process of consuming a shark.

I misunderstood what LK was saying but she's right, and JT "man eating shark" and "man-eating shark" are not the same thing.
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Old 10-05-09, 11:33 PM   #22
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For what it's worth I came into this thread expecting to see the Bizarre Foods guy eating a shark.
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Old 10-06-09, 04:34 AM   #23
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holy fuck these responses are long.

if it was the shark eating the man,it would be a man-eating shark. unless a moron wrote it.....


there we go...now can this thread close?
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Old 10-06-09, 04:37 AM   #24
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no that's wrong haha... you do need the comma

man eating shark and man-eating shark is the same

man, eating shark is the different one.. i learnt this in liberal arts


nah man you're wrong...assuming the words man eating shark are written down alone, you need a hyphen between man and eating for the context of the three words to refer to a shark that eats people, otherwise it clearly refers to a man eating a shark

i learnt this in english
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Old 10-06-09, 04:42 AM   #25
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im goin' for page 3...

...we can do it...


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im goin' for page 3...

...we can do it...


s.v.


*cheats.*


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*cheats.*


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*twice* .
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Old 10-06-09, 04:48 AM   #29
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*twice* .


^^^3 the hard way...



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Old 10-06-09, 05:18 PM   #30
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