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| it sucks more than my mom lmao |
  
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07-24-04, 03:23 AM
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it was good not hot but above good work on ya vocab though
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07-24-04, 03:24 AM
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and that is it pc
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07-29-04, 12:30 PM
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IP: 8E70 C31B
^ thanks bump...............
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07-29-04, 12:49 PM
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*WOOT WOOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!* the mascot/groupie (juss playing chase!) and F.T.C. right????????? that flowed well together and I liked it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~big up~
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07-29-04, 05:17 PM
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bump!
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07-30-04, 01:24 PM
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Thank You, Come Again
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IP: 8D48 2106
thnx all 4 fb....more plz...open mic of july/august plz...lol
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07-30-04, 03:18 PM
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Cypher King. True Story.
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The only problem that I have with it was that the lines seemed stretched. Oh and that you seemed like you were throwing complex words in there just for effect. Other than that, dope drop. NOT flow of the month shit though.
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07-30-04, 03:22 PM
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they arent.. and its wordplay. please dont give fb if u dont understand
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07-30-04, 03:39 PM
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Cypher King. True Story.
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Ass. Wordplay is beyond just using words that you really don't know just to sound cool. Don't critique feedback if you don't read it properly. Now, like i said, some of the lines seemed stretched and throwing complex words in a drop just for effect isn't good. |
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07-30-04, 04:00 PM
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it doesnt matter if lines are stretched in text, read it out loud or there isnt any flow, and if u can critizie so well, write something better.
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07-30-04, 04:09 PM
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Cypher King. True Story.
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What? First and foremost, it DOES matter. Text is nothing but writing your rhymes. If your written shit don't have a decent flow to it, we know how shitty your audio sounds. How do you figure that it doesn't matter? Second, if that's what you want, then I will. Give me a line limit. |
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07-30-04, 04:12 PM
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Thank You, Come Again
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IP: 8D48 2106
dont relly know I knoww all the words I used duh.......not everyones stupid...
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07-30-04, 04:13 PM
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Thank You, Come Again
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IP: 8D48 2106
but thnx 4 tha feedback
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07-30-04, 04:23 PM
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Cypher King. True Story.
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I'm not saying you're stupid. Hehe, I was simply saying that the amount of big words you put in there gives off the impression that you wrote that using a thesaurus for every word in there. I'm not hating, unlike what your partner thinks. Keep it up. |
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07-31-04, 12:24 AM
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Thank You, Come Again
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too k me 5 mintues to do mine.......and thnx we NEED constructive critcsim
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