Voted For: D523

I Slap Frauds,This Drones A Broke Joke I'll Bomb-this-Crook…
Im 4 Loot- You Cant Even See-'D'OH Wid 'Simpsons Comic Books..
kinda lame... no offence - 4/10
Steppin Up? Ya Wrong-Foot..Hes Trippen Ya Straight Ripped-Son.
Coz Given ''Detailed-Reports'' The Only Time 'D'SCRIPTs-Shon!!
sal right - 5/10
(Description)
Young Is 'Grindin For Cash' So If you Plottin On 'Robbin My Stash..
Burst Pounds,And u'll Get The 1st Round Like Lebron In The Draft...
Didnt rhyme/flow - 3/10
A Fuckin' Hookers Lips Spit Him On a Parking Meter…
The Kid was Hot Once..In a test tube..On a Hospital Heater…
Almost hit it but was irrelevant to the first line...unless of course Another Hooker came along and fucked the parking meter moments later, thats a different story. But we dont really see that too often do we. - 5/10
With Back Hands y’n “Ran-A-Face-Lift” With Slams-Of-Greatness..
Prove “I Gave (OG’s)there Rap Start” Like The Dude In SanAndreas..
nah - 3/10
20/50

Salright I spose... Coulda seen a little bit more effort though...

Have you ever noticed that when you spit, nobody pays attention
Your boring ass couldn’t stick out in the fucking third dimension
pretty clever - 6/10
Haha, look at this rookie, trying to be a hot emcee
Your lyrics put us in a deep sleep like we all have narcolepsy
salright - 5/10
Your rhymes make me sick to my stomach, im about to throw up
You had a better chance of winning if you didn’t even show up
meh - 4/10
Felt left out, so he made up that he was the rookie of the year.. thats nice
It's obvious you repeat everythin you say, in the rules u put no crew votes twice
pretty good personal - 6/10
Why did i accept, good emcees to battle is what i prefer
13 wins? well i guess that 13 is your unlucky number
Didnt really ryme... but good try 3/10
23/50

This was a very close battle... But I think That D523 Takes this with better structure, better flow, and better diction.

V/ D523

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Voted For: Young Blaze

Have you ever noticed that when you spit, nobody pays attention
Your boring ass couldn’t stick out in the fucking third dimension
Little stretched, but aight...
Haha, look at this rookie, trying to be a hot emcee
Your lyrics put us in a deep sleep like we all have narcolepsy
Could have been stronger...
Your rhymes make me sick to my stomach, im about to throw up
You had a better chance of winning if you didn’t even show up
OK...
Felt left out, so he made up that he was the rookie of the year.. thats nice
It's obvious you repeat everythin you say, in the rules u put no crew votes twice
Ha...
Why did i accept, good emcees to battle is what i prefer
13 wins? well i guess that 13 is your unlucky number
Eh........weak...



I Slap Frauds,This Drones A Broke Joke I'll Bomb-this-Crook…
Im 4 Loot- You Cant Even See-'D'OH Wid 'Simpsons Comic Books..
Ha....OK
Steppin Up? Ya Wrong-Foot..Hes Trippen Ya Straight Ripped-Son.
Coz Given ''Detailed-Reports'' The Only Time 'D'SCRIPTs-Shon!!
Eh... not feeling it....
Young Is 'Grindin For Cash' So If you Plottin On 'Robbin My Stash..
Burst Pounds,And u'll Get The 1st Round Like Lebron In The Draft...
OK...
A Fuckin' Hookers Lips Spit Him On a Parking Meter…
The Kid was Hot Once..In a test tube..On a Hospital Heater…
Damn...
With Back Hands y’n “Ran-A-Face-Lift” With Slams-Of-Greatness..
Prove “I Gave (OG’s)there Rap Start” Like The Dude In SanAndreas..
Good closer..

I'm not big on the pop culture references, but I usually don't factor that into the vote..personals and connection between lines went to 523, but Blaze had complexity and multis hands down...523's first two bars really could have used some tweaking, the punch wasn't as heavy as it could have been.....Some of Blaze's lines were stretched, but humor and punches made up for that, but he wins my vote by opening strong with a complex multi and closing with a nice personal..

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uppin for some more votes.. thanks everyone that voted well rtf !

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OptimisticallyGenius

Voted For: Young Blaze

ok heres how it goes

I Slap Frauds,This Drones A Broke Joke I'll Bomb-this-Crook…
Im 4 Loot- You Cant Even See-'D'OH Wid 'Simpsons Comic Books..
6/10...6 cuz the 2nd line was good but first wasnt, nice punch though
Steppin Up? Ya Wrong-Foot..Hes Trippen Ya Straight Ripped-Son.
Coz Given ''Detailed-Reports'' The Only Time 'D'SCRIPTs-Shon!!
(Description)
7/10...nice punch here,sticking with the 'D' shit...it helped the punch out
Young Is 'Grindin For Cash' So If you Plottin On 'Robbin My Stash..
Burst Pounds,And u'll Get The 1st Round Like Lebron In The Draft...
5/10...this punch is pretty played and first line was badA Fuckin' Hookers Lips Spit Him On a Parking Meter…
The Kid was Hot Once..In a test tube..On a Hospital Heater…
6/10...wasnt really feelin the heater lineWith Back Hands y’n “Ran-A-Face-Lift” With Slams-Of-Greatness..
Prove “I Gave (OG’s)there Rap Start” Like The Dude In SanAndreas..
5/10...didnt like the last line, it was bad
29/50

Have you ever noticed that when you spit, nobody pays attention
Your boring ass couldn’t stick out in the fucking third dimension
7/10...woodve got better but the first line wasnt great...but 2nd line was nice
Haha, look at this rookie, trying to be a hot emcee
Your lyrics put us in a deep sleep like we all have narcolepsy
6/10...also had a wack first line but 2nd was niceYour rhymes make me sick to my stomach, im about to throw up
You had a better chance of winning if you didn’t even show up
4/10...wack, both played ass hell
Felt left out, so he made up that he was the rookie of the year.. thats nice
It's obvious you repeat everythin you say, in the rules u put no crew votes twice
6/10...decent personals, line was stretched though
Why did i accept, good emcees to battle is what i prefer
13 wins? well i guess that 13 is your unlucky number
5/10...played
28/50

overall:
nice battle here, both have good openers but should improve on closers, also d523 could upp the multies,both have nice personals and punches, also both need to try and make each line of the bar have a nice punch othwise the first line is useless...nice battle here though

v/ young blaze

werd, i liked this battle, by the way both rtf, if you want

uppin this shit for some more votes!!!

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OptimisticallyGenius

upppppiiinnnnn.................................... .

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uppin this shit negrooo

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OptimisticallyGenius

upppppppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

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OptimisticallyGenius

Boostin this shit for these guys, show some love..... No good deed goes unpunished. Stop being selfish, if you read a battle, then take 2 minutes outta your life to vote.

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what elementality said.. vote peoplee

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OptimisticallyGenius

Voted For: Young Blaze

pretty good battle here, decent punches from both and some ok multies, but ima have to go wit Young Blaze on this joint. he had some hot punches in his shit and better flow.

Young blaze= nice verse dog, some pretty decent punches in there, u had the best punch in the battle. some pretty good multies but some of ya bars were kind of a stretch to make sense. kinda weak closer and opener tho.
*young Blaze's* best bar=
Young Is 'Grindin For Cash' So If you Plottin On 'Robbin My Stash..
Burst Pounds,And u'll Get The 1st Round Like Lebron In The Draft...
^^hhah hot shit, best bar in the battle, good delivery and nice flow on this shit

D523=ok verse from you, ya had some decent punches and an ok flow, but overall not too hot otherwise. most of ya punches i heard before; shoulda put some multies in ya verse to give it some flava, nah mean. but u came pretty hard, just not enuff.
*D523"s* best bar=
Have you ever noticed that when you spit, nobody pays attention
Your boring ass couldn’t stick out in the fucking third dimension
^^funny, good delivery i was feelin ya opener here.

overall= young blaze got this shit nice drop from ya. RETURN THE FAVOR...LINKS ARE IN THE SIG...1..

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OM's

Voted For: D523

Have you ever noticed that when you spit, nobody pays attention
Your boring ass couldn’t stick out in the fucking third dimension
5...aight meta but weak line!!
Haha, look at this rookie, trying to be a hot emcee
Your lyrics put us in a deep sleep like we all have narcolepsy
6...better but still needs work!!
Your rhymes make me sick to my stomach, im about to throw up
You had a better chance of winning if you didn’t even show up
2...bleh!! weak and played out!!
Felt left out, so he made up that he was the rookie of the year.. thats nice
It's obvious you repeat everythin you say, in the rules u put no crew votes twice
4...nah not feelin it!!! and way stretched!!
Why did i accept, good emcees to battle is what i prefer
13 wins? well i guess that 13 is your unlucky number
4...wtf!!! not even a punch really!!

OVERALL: 21/50


I Slap Frauds,This Drones A Broke Joke I'll Bomb-this-Crook…
Im 4 Loot- You Cant Even See-'D'OH Wid 'Simpsons Comic Books..
7...nice shit, gud opener and pretty funny!!
Steppin Up? Ya Wrong-Foot..Hes Trippen Ya Straight Ripped-Son.
Coz Given ''Detailed-Reports'' The Only Time 'D'SCRIPTs-Shon!!
7...hotness, gud wordplay!!
Young Is 'Grindin For Cash' So If you Plottin On 'Robbin My Stash..
Burst Pounds,And u'll Get The 1st Round Like Lebron In The Draft...
6...weaker, but still not too wack!!
A Fuckin' Hookers Lips Spit Him On a Parking Meter…
The Kid was Hot Once..In a test tube..On a Hospital Heater…
5...played concept but ya puti n a nice twist to it!!
With Back Hands y’n “Ran-A-Face-Lift” With Slams-Of-Greatness..
Prove “I Gave (OG’s)there Rap Start” Like The Dude In SanAndreas..
6...gud closer, nice vocabs to!!

OVERALL: 31/50


aight young blaze killed this battle.....D523 came with some played concepts and just was too basic....no real punches and didnt get creative at all........blaze had some dope wordplay in his spit, couple of nice plays on D's name and some decent vocabs......overall had a far better verse and was more hard hittin!!!!

V/ - Young Blaze

Aight yo return the favour on that lyricalflowz battle one of ya cuz ya aint got the post counts to hit the others!!! pz!!

Vote switched

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ass clown shit!!!!

i voted on the wrong one

don't worry i'm a post sum shit so strobe can fix that!!!!!

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