Cmon Man Ya Rhymes is too loose man....Care to be tightened?
News Flash?...Your wack .....Jus Thought You should be enlightend
ts should be a crime to battles such wackness...a Trash of my Time
I would cut ya words short......but I Can see you already Slashed Yo lines

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Stanza, you showed improvement here. You had 2 bars which were actually not bad at all, a decent effort. You had 1 REALLY bad line tho... I almost wanted to vote against you becuz of it. It was the line about gas and raps rhyming. Dude, gas and raps DO rhyme... yes, not directly, but say them... queer raps....tear gas... definately rhyme. You basically dissed yourself and made yourself look real dumb with that line, but other than that, not bad, looks like ur gettin' the idea of battlin' down more, just keep workin' at it.

Enlightend, ur problem is 2 things... first off, u had A LOT of played shit.. u might think some of that stuff is fresh but trust me its not.. and ur wording is really off on it anyway. Doesn't hit directly... ur flow is tight man, no doubt about that, but this is text. In audio flow is important.. in text, its really not a factor.. you also gotta work on writin' disses man. More than half ur shit was self-glory or statementish, u didn't really diss him or say why he sucks.. read battles from me, glocks, fletcher, n' other good dudes to get the idea.

Vote - Stanza

coin from you trus ill take that to heart thanx for the comments and im startin my audio prolly tommorow my mic is so hot so watch out lol

5-0 .......isnt that a ko

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