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Old 11-24-06, 09:57 PM   #16
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kid's throwing up the 'Gay' sign, i'll take a stab at those
and have you breathing through plastic like Michael Jacksons nose
wow, stand-up/sit down? nameplays i've never known kid
you're a fruit who sleeps with more pricks than a bed of roses
you're like the wackest here, it's sad that you're so lame though
maybe this would be even... if you were only battling Faimez Quotes
'a ban don' lmmfao... you're must be joking beyond mention
keep stretching wordplay... but you still aren't building atension
cause nerd, all I see r v's.... cause i'm getting all the victories dyke
all you see RV... just cause your geek ass fucking lives on the site
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Old 11-24-06, 10:52 PM   #17
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a michael jackson line!?!? its you who's played, don't make me repeat it
'coz this ain't no fuckin thriller.. so kid, how 'bout you beat it
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^ damn, that bars wack.. hell all my bars seem wack as i'm readin 'em
but hey.. its not my fault.. I'M A FUCKING COMEDIAN
so all i see is RV.. I guess we got somethin' in common don't we son
'coz all ure seein' is RV to.. considering that ure living out of one
don't test me you bum.. in the end you'll just be part of the wreckage
i'll have all my bars takin AIM just so ure stupid ass gets the message
keep throwin the punches.. an i'll continue to pound on 'em fast
'coz i bring the mega hurts.. with 20,000 volts up ure ass
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Old 11-25-06, 12:28 AM   #18
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its a Disgrace Why should I even start in the cypher the shits a waste
Bcuz Ive Merked Enlightened With The Comedians Fame S. Qoutes of Nicks Face
Damn Enlightened Get Crunched Like almonds, and Then Auctioned of at bargains
Too Bad It was a Charity Drive, you gettin deprived of your pride oh so often
But Lets get down to business sorry for the small talk Let me put the caps on
And straight Joe Jackson yall Michaels so im puttin the Smack on head Cap-Son !!
Nicks my only real competition,but he get admissioned to my abolition
The ammunition, get to spittin and hit Silently every sec....Stop the tickin
you cant, Nick get shanked and whats the Squared pants fall off the Sponge
Cuz we know he jus a suck up of everyones spit...he skilled has to be skavenged
Straight Blast the zone. rip out his Backbone And watch the Nicks Sing Baritone
I Avenge The stonehenge of Fletcher Tomb Stone..You'll Talk through a Gramophone
Watch Me act out Bitch, Like Goodrich and Leave Yall Nuts Loose like Goodwrench
Yo crew is weak ill Kidnap bout 50 and watch this G's Unit loose its Cents
Cmon wheres The arc i spark 3's all Night In the dark jus ask the dog that barks
When Nick Embarks from the start I hope he finds that Sigs are so played
...................and So Is Two exclamation marks ! .
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Old 11-25-06, 03:15 PM   #19
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You rhyme like dikes, you never heard your rhymes was tight.
matter fact, out of that long ass verse. .
....I ain't see not ONE line I liked!
What I'm dropping is real, you keep acting soft, you'll get killed
your lines are stretched as fuck. .
....why can't that concept rub off on your skills?
Instead of stretching lines, stretch your texting skills, try it
or you'll just 'keep on losing'. .
....like a 'person's weight while they're on a diet!
Comedian.. you're supposed to be good at making some jokes.
but only thing funny about you... is you thinking you're dope!
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Old 11-25-06, 04:06 PM   #20
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Damn

I see ya Concepts and I Really dont want to Mess with you
Wait a Minute I've seen that concept bfore....damn ya styles dejavu
Why do I even bother responding to you when Yo Hustle doesnt makes sense
That explains yo funds...words of advice..noone's name can be a sentence
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Old 11-25-06, 05:39 PM   #21
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You was never hot, where you get the impression you dope, clown?
^them bars would've won against Comedian. .
....but you stepping to Quotez now!
You must step your game up if you tryna go against me
or ya verses'll just flop... like the albums of most emcees!
Talkin bout dejavus.. I just got one, from ripping through this prick to win
cuz I defeated you before... and now, I see myself doing it again!
You beating me? Why even put a grand down on it.
cuz ya bars are 'out of place'. .
like 'using rulers without putting ya hands down on it!
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Old 11-25-06, 07:13 PM   #22
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Yo


Pudding


^dope
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Old 11-25-06, 07:22 PM   #23
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^Wow.. you elevated lol

Honestly, I'm not even gonna waste time merking this scrub.
cause that drop... was alot better than your verses above!
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Old 11-25-06, 08:17 PM   #24
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Thanx for the props now drop U wanna be cop...I see ya Blue and white
Ya verse aint shit but opening hype before I come out and rip the mic
get ya "shit right" before ya "ass get left" behind in this game
Ya Nintendo skills come on man You cant hang Like Wii ...So lame
wtf you want to go at it with me? I dont roll that way but I must say
I will Tear off ya mouth from ya face and make you watch ya talk..Per-say
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Old 11-25-06, 08:33 PM   #25
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I'ma recording artist with a deal, you don't get cheese to rap tracks.
and you right, I wanna be a cop. .
....to arrest you for being that whack!
People joked with you, called you nice, and now this rapper believin it.
but seriously, quit droppin them verses. .
....cause it's not like RV's actually reading it!
You don't drop dope, so why you claim you do in your verses?
I lay down tracks, only thing you'll lay. .
....is yourself in casket at ya funeral service!
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Old 11-25-06, 10:01 PM   #26
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I sat back and watched.. and these two went at it for a bit
But before I get to Faime.. can I just say - Stanza wack piece of shit
My punches'll blast stanza.. and faime can then feel the ripples
Hell, you two tag against me..
.. it'll only be a handicap 'coz I'm beatin two cripples
Although stanza is weak.. this other guy can't drop a single decent lyric
I mean even his own Hall doesn't want him featured in it
Kids line up to beat him.. but not me, no thanks.. I'll pass
'Coz when I got to the front of Q.. he wouldn't stop starin at my ass
And my beef with stanza.. fuck it, this kid can't handle me in a fight
But, I will say he's a consistent guy..
.. when it comes to getting banned from this fucking site.
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Old 11-26-06, 12:00 PM   #27
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