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07-12-05, 05:42 PM
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IP: F758 A55D
Voted For: flow verse
flow verse has a killer opening and closing, the closing is probably the best punch of the battle good wordplay by fv, but maybe too much (almost every line) fv's punches are much better than export's, almost every one of his lines is a good punch export has better flow, because of his multis fv's flow isn't that good (line length) my fav punches are fv's spiked punch and paper mache lines except for the flow, flow verse takes this battle easily vote: flow verse please vote on my battle with docontinue: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=198898 |
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07-14-05, 10:18 AM
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New to RV
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IP: 8191 8B5F
upinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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07-14-05, 05:02 PM
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IP: E31E 5CBB
UPIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIN THIS VOTES PLEASE thanks
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 just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . .  or u just gonna make me laff
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07-15-05, 05:51 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: E31E 5CBB
comon guys can u please vote on this battle so i can be done with this . . . THANK YOU
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just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . . or u just gonna make me laff
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07-16-05, 07:42 AM
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WhoAreYou?
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IP: A181 D033
Voted For: flow verse
Ok this was a decent battle but i thought flow verse had a superior verse: "Export," you got that right cause i'm about to "ship" you out of RV/ Cat even if you "elevated" your game and got "UPS" u still couldn't "deliver" a line that would impress me/ lol i thought that line was nice even though the punchline felt a lil bit too stretched. 6/10 cat u cat rap so give up on the mic/ dog the "punches" are just like those at college parties "spiked"/ this wasn't very good to be honest i thought the set up was weak and the punchline was poor 3/10 and even if you rhymes attracted "AIDS" they still wouldn't be "sick"/ and this battle is over cause like "paper mache" you've just been "ripped"/ ok this was an ok closer but nothing special to be completely honest with you. 5/10 overall 14/30 = 47% Export: I'm Quick to Slap This Newb That Simply has no clue Like a Tattoo, This Loss is always gonna be stuck on you this was a weak opener. you shoulda come with a harder punch. 3/10 The Words that i Spit have Shredded-Yah-Credit Iam a Soilder, yah A Pussy NewsCaster Embedded hmm nah too much self glorification.no distinguishable punch. 1/10 Yah Rhyems ant Hot, they Colder then Jack Frost Only Blood yah spilled was a aids case at Red Cross weak. 1/10 This Ant Know Battle, Torture of No Prevention Pay attention, I dont follow the Geneva-Convention nah this was wack, just a statement, no punch 0/10 overall 5/40 = 12.5% export you need to elevate and stop using self glorification and statements. learn to develop your punches. flow verse you also need to develop your punches more so that you can come harder with your verse. Anyway flow verse gets this one |
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07-16-05, 07:43 AM
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WhoAreYou?
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IP: A181 D033
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07-16-05, 10:39 AM
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IP: 354F E428
Voted For: Export
and even if you rhymes attracted "AIDS" they still wouldn't be "sick"/ and this battle is over cause like "paper mache" you've just been "ripped"/ bit from eminem... "i ripped him like a paper mache" V/ Export for not biting... flow, if u complain about the vote, then get banned for biting...  |
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07-18-05, 09:03 AM
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vanquising Mc's Daily
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This was feedback posted for Export
IP: 8191 8B5F
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07-18-05, 04:49 PM
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IP: 8191 8B5F
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07-21-05, 01:44 PM
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New to RV
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IP: 8191 8B5F
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07-21-05, 09:49 PM
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IP: E31E 5CBB
IT'S ALL . . . . GOOD RAISING THIS . . . VOTES PPL . . . LETS GO . . . thanks !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . . or u just gonna make me laff
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07-22-05, 06:07 PM
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IP: E31E 5CBB
uppin this i need one more vote . . . . thanks
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just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . . or u just gonna make me laff
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07-23-05, 12:30 AM
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IP: E31E 5CBB
upping one more vote ppl . . comon . . . thanks
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just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . . or u just gonna make me laff
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07-23-05, 12:39 AM
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IP: 46F5 4B30
Voted For: Export
Export I'm Quick to Slap This Newb That Simply has no clue Like a Tattoo, This Loss is always gonna be stuck on you Eh, bad similie and bad punch. The Words that i Spit have Shredded-Yah-Credit Iam a Soilder, yah A Pussy NewsCaster Embedded Bad punch. Yah Rhyems ant Hot, they Colder then Jack Frost Only Blood yah spilled was a aids case at Red Cross Bad punch again. This Ant Know Battle, Torture of No Prevention Pay attention, I dont follow the Geneva-Convention What the hell at the random multis. Study my words, Cause unlike Herbs, there Superb Horrible closer, self glorification Overall you need to work on originality and making your punches hit harder. They just have bad concepts, and your "wordplay" is old. Try re wording your concepts into nice punches. flow verse Export," you got that right cause i'm about to "ship" you out of RV/ Cat even if you "elevated" your game and got "UPS" u still couldn't "deliver" a line that would impress me/ Last line threw flow off, unoriginal punch. cat u cat rap so give up on the mic/ dog the "punches" are just like those at college parties "spiked"/ Statement and bad similie. No punch. and even if you rhymes attracted "AIDS" they still wouldn't be "sick"/ and this battle is over cause like "paper mache" you've just been "ripped"/ *yawn* Unoriginal AIDs punch and last one was blah. You really need to work on more original concepts. No real punches, just statements. Similies were bad too. Work on making real punches, and real personals. My vote goes to Export for an attempt at punches, even though they were weak, they did hit somewhat. v- Export
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