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1 | 16.67% |
...D.P... |
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5 | 83.33% |
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QU3 M! D3$T!NO 3$ M! UN!CO 3N3M!GO
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IP: 79A6 27AB
ight bet uppin for some votes.
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Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
Voted For: ...D.P...
emotion,story line, structure, and general content go to Rob. This is one sided. . castro your verse dibbles on about nothing, it doesnt hit hard with any emotion, no story line twists and turns, and just generally boring bro. |
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IP: 860D ECBB
Voted For: ...D.P...
Rob wins this battle for me,. Cas I wasn't feeling the opening bars:************* A windy day wit no sign of no one near my way When I got a call from a girl that lived by my place And all she said was come quick I maybe a horny bitch So I went to the store and got me some condoms really quick I call back the bitch to come back to my crib Made the lights dim as soon as she came in Clothes soon hittin the floor, all torned and ripped Had her on her back, about to stick it in Got the condom put it on, and then the moment really begins All slippery, wet, body temperature climate risin quick Felt so good, the movement of her grindin on it Before the end she gave me head real quick But in the moment I took off the rubber I had on my dick Sensational tingle as I came in her quick and That’s when the problems really had began **************************************** I like when you twisted it 5 years later but it all become far to predictable for me. I like the meaning of your verse but sum bits were poorly written.:************ For weeks I felt the same, so I went to the doctor and all I can do is wait An hour has passed in the clinic my turn to go so I got up and went in ************************************* I feel you could have made this a whole lot better u just seem to overcomplicate. But this was dope,.. Now thinking: can’t be no lower, can’t see no higher Cuz I can’t raise and conceive a child can’t have what was my “Deepest Desire” ****Topicals need to had flow, u still have to count syllables for decent flow. I felt your vocab could be up-ed didn't see anything dope but it was a good drop. Rob: I like the way u write we have the same style 4 lines try adding inners for better flow, it would boost complexity. Vocab was nice, can be up-ed,. flow nice, was pretty easy to read.. didnt give me a picture of what was going on in my head but I understand the whole concept. This was a good battle but Robs verse was just better every thing was on pont dope drop fam. |
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WhoAreYou?
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IP: A181 D033
upping this battle man this shit's 6 months old now come on people
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IP: 0992 DDA2
Voted For: Castro
yes 200 posts, Now i can Vote! Castro got this, it was more in-depth and related to everyday life
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