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06-28-06, 07:19 PM | #1 | |||
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Thanks alot, I apreciate that alot..and yup you might not be able to tell with the cockyness i might say in my tracks im pretty humble...and thanks again I apreciate this and im definitely gon try do what you say..EQ'ng is a problem with me, even when readin the tut you put up I still find it difficult and the mic im using is the Shure SM 58
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06-26-06, 05:57 PM | #2 | ||
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Scared cuz these are old but
www.soundclick.com/therevelation ATW Anthem Let Me In Collab Speak On It
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06-28-06, 06:54 PM | #3 | |||
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The Revelation, Your mic is horrendous, so right off the bat you won't be marketable since no one will like records with bad quality. Your flow is hella rushed in some cases, you need better word conservation to push that back on, instead of all jagged and lumpy. Sounds liek you need better headphones too because you come in real low-energy on tracks that are high energy, usually a sign of a limp and un-inspiring sound system. Your beat choices are pretty good, just that you don't mesh with them or match their mood, likely for the reasons above. That's really all I can tell you for now man till you get your sound quality on point. 1
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06-26-06, 05:59 PM | #4 | ||
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word props on this
www.soundclick.com/spul 1. "Shake That (Break It Down)" 2. "This Way, Thay Way" ft. Triple_N 3. "Y'all Know Me" thanks in advance
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07-03-06, 07:12 PM | #5 | |||
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SPuL, your lyrics are well written, you could use some heavy EQing in your lows to bring more bass and some grit out of your voice. it sounds like structurally you have it together but the verbal packaging doesn't feel effective, it doesn't grab. Could be your mic, but you'll still come up with some EQing. Your cadence is what is seperating the rhymes from the deliv. Sounds like you should be spittin the lyrics completely differently with different attenuation on the words. It makes you unique, but not that marketable in that respect. Someone would have to connect with your content or your background in order to be a "fan", rather than your tracks are good quality, but sound too formulaic and liek you're going through the motions. Theres no creativity injected in it, just sticking with what worked the last 40 times. Some variety in the tracks would be welcomed. All the verses are recorded and adlibbed in the same style, all spit in the same flow, same deliv, etc. only difference is the beat and sometimes the topic. Got redundant REAL fast, especially with your cadence as it is it started to wear on me as I listened to it. All in all, I think you need something new and fresh in your style. you need to break every "routine" you have right now and change your self because you sound like the progression of a stagnant artist too stuck in their comfort zone. You have the materials you need to be ill, just not the order and packaging. real talk as always. Uno.
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07-03-06, 08:41 PM | #6 | |||
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word, appreciate it a lot man. def gonna try some new shit. major props for takin' the time. pcc |
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06-26-06, 06:03 PM | #7 | ||
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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=537237 Check Out "I Need No Introduction"Ft.JD(Im Second) http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4098281 "The Streed Breed"(Intro Track) http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4098894 "The Man Behind The Mask" http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4102510 Thanks
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07-03-06, 07:34 PM | #8 | |||
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Half Breed aka this is the 17th time I changed my name, man your mic BLOWS. You should EQ like...immediately. close this window right now and bust open a track and start EQing. You've got som punches and some entertaining lines, but the weak sound quality makes it A: hard to hear B: hard to listen to. For me who's not used to your acent (since some words rhyme in your accent that don't rhyme in mine) this compounds the prior two problems into a glob of "say wtf?". Some tracks I can hear your mic screaming in the BG so I turned em off for two reasons. I can't fuck with high pitch sounds and also a mic that sounds like that will immedately make you unmarketable since no one wants to listen to bad quality vocals. You got lyrics and pretty solid beat choices, just busted vocal qual. You'd shine once you adress that. Your flow came back on time, I can remember when it used to be busted, look liek you fixed that up nicely. If you adressed those fidelity issues you'd have an album that even underground US heads would buy, or at the very least listen to and be interested in. You need some tracks that show off your lyrical juggling and writing ability more to break the routines and subjects you use now. Don't make the mistake oh so many people do and stick your self in a vein of meloncholoy music and shit like that because that gets old REAL fast. People get tired of hearing you talk about your problems so steer clear of that. That subject matter + your voice = bad combo of boredom. Your voice should stay clear of anything that's monotone, it just won't endure, at least not with the gear and settings that you have now. You should come back to this thread once you get a new mic ANNDDD EQ. Notice that those two are together, not seperate. don't half ass your own music because you're robbing your self. See you then. 1
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07-04-06, 12:25 PM | #9 | |||
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Thanks man.i have a new mic at my aunts so i jus gotta go there.Appriciate it!
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11-02-06, 09:51 AM | #10 | ||
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11-16-06, 06:22 PM | #11 | |
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"For Ya Fam" "Thank You" "Summertime Vibe" Hope to hear what you think APEXX... Thanks bro. |
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06-26-06, 06:19 PM | #12 | ||
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ok, time to start the list:
7.curse Konvict NYC Rev Spul UNF aka Half Breed.
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06-26-06, 06:23 PM | #13 | |
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yea man...like i said imagine w/ studio quality, all i can afford is my 15 dollar dynamic radioshack mic...so yep, but yea i hear what your sayin on the other stuff...thanks
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06-26-06, 08:02 PM | #14 | |||
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I can't "imagine with studio quality" because you'll sound completely different. You'll also react to your sound differently too because you can hear things on better gear that you can't hear on cheap shit. aka: a whole different rapper. Signed, Living Proof.
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06-26-06, 08:09 PM | #15 | |||
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^^ thats true when i went up too the studio too record a few songs...shit sounded waaaaaaay the hell hotter then what was on my reg. set up |
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