Voted For: Empire

he had much better wordplay, was a little off at times, but the explanation helped a little

return the favor:
Eyvon vs. poison
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=154599

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Voted For: Empire

OAKLEY:
Empire, You pointless like when blind people Blink...
Your whole "IMAGE" is more played than a highlighted Link.

booo... not a good opener or punch... pointless like when blind people blink?... blind folks ain't got fingers?

Quit playin, Curve your hat. Your as white as my Hanes.
And do this site a favor and pick an element of Chains!

no punch... chains ain't gonna help this site at all... what ya tryna get at?

From silver to gold, to your body tone in Bold
Answer this one for me, Since when do "thugs" Bowl?

filler... weak punch again...

Your a disgrace, a waste, an Idol for what is bad taste
Equivalent to what I place when I scroll-select "double space"

nice try...but still fell short... kinda understood it after i read it a few times

You can rest asure your less, And no...I'm not CarsonJet...
And I can sit back and laugh, At your claim's of a Vet.

weak closer... ya almost dissed yaself with tha one
structure was a little off... one personal about the bowling but not very effective... no multies, no metas, punches were weak, build on ya vocab... see the potential but not quite ready for the bigger kats yet...overall 5.0/10

Empire:

Spit the hardest?no yous a 'ARTIST' so the closest yall ever be is a 'PRINCE'
Respect the ruler ya punches like zab judda lightweight should give you a hint

funny shyt...good opener

Yous a vet? no i checked you just a big mouth rookie with posts
Trash herb like wins protected by passwords and ya cookies is broke

decent personal... nice effective punch... watch the forced use of multies though

This is a joke as for 'OAK'......i burn trees in daily rotation
Its so sad too bad you stare at my picture with jeoulous hatrad

i understand where this was going (looking at ya pics in member mugshots...lol) but didn't hit as hard as it should have... set up was nice but ya ended it weak

Its basic ya elevation is off facing a moment of crisis
Ya text dont connect like broken computer devices

again good set-up but the rest fell short.... connect lines w/ computers has been done to death


FINISHER-

Rap battles should supply saddles all the dickriding going on in the site
Couple 1000 posts winning off D.R votes no wonder you think that you nice

hard-hitting finisher... way to end a verse...
watch out for line stretching... you can say the same shyt with less words and still keep a good flow... personals were hitting... nice use of wordplay here and there...overall 7.8/10

Voted For: Oakley

oakleyz flow flowed bettr n wuz reel tite, he had hot punchlinez an disses dat hit real hard an empirez flow wuznt az creative as oakley so oakley getz my vote

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blah...........................checkin' the damn polls

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Voted For: Empire

Empire
his flow was mad nice he came harder structure was cool punches was cool personals was aiight good battle both yall came at it good was this a beef or just for fun??

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checking polls, meh, im not alloud to vote!!!!!!!!

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