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[~*Lady Fiya*~] 5 100.00%
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Old 10-13-04, 09:46 PM   #16
~Luciano~
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Voted For: [~*Lady Fiya*~]


I'ma go easy in this...I am a gentleman honestly...
Wait a sec...is this bitch actually comin' on to me?
2/10
Sorry girl...I'm happy wit my Jenn...I'm actually spoken for...
"Happy birthday"...this evidence that you're a broken whore...
1.10
If your that desperate...well here, this is your present...
Anotha loss on your record...I will be the one who sent it
1/10
Pain is inevitable...no matter what...suffering is optional...
You couldn't win this battle...If I dropped a verse that was topical
4/10
Well, this was fun...but I am sorry to say this battle is over...
I've put ya "Fiya" out...but for good measure...
3/10

This wasent one of your best drops by a longshot
could of elevated and dropped some tighter vocab here
wasent really any metta's and no real personals
ya punches didnt hit hard at all
seemed like u were tryin 2 jus talk instead of Insult her

heads cuppin' this coaster so he towin' our feat! (toe in our feet)
got verbals? we heard ya, Limited just "a-band-on" the beat!
3/10
like Bush for spelling Bs, post vote- ya screen's last resort!
say sorry mama, "baby grams" are just too much to abort!!
4/10
record's timed to die, bitch identified at lyrical morgues!
verse missd a score, your a vet but the worst on-board!
2/10
can't spit fire?! if you dress you screen in RV's red skin! (user cp)
structure's obese, as a middle weight you can barely win?!
1/10
you gettin' thin again, ya diet's gettin' ya verse in writin'!
Em's side-kick on-line, when you get ready your exercisin'!
3/10
love handlin' pound this cake stretch layers n miles u ate it! (8 mile)
barely made it, in crew rosters, his record postured D-graded!
3/10
like mute winnin' debates, pacin' words has no voice-effect!
old crew grew heads, your ill intent's a removed birth defect!
5/10

Ya vocab was pretty good here i guess
u had some nice multies
ya personals were eh eh so so i guess could have been better
some shit i didnt really get so u lost points for that
ya Metas were ok also i guess
ya Punches hit alot harder than ya comp which got u tha Win

....Nuff Said....
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