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02-12-04, 02:59 AM
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IP: 54CE EF3B
Uppin.............................................
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02-12-04, 03:23 AM
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Da KiNg Of PwNaGe
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02-12-04, 11:33 PM
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Uppin
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02-13-04, 11:24 AM
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02-13-04, 11:31 AM
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IP: 7E0D 5861
Yo vote Quelude
Flow/ he had a nice flow going on with gud rhymes, wordplay could be betta tho, gud variation; JMH din't had a lot of variation, his rhymes were zzz....... Punchlines: Quelude had more punches and they just came harder than JMH cuz his punches were all played i thought Personals: They both had sum weak personals but Quelude had more and his personals just came betta than JMH Multis: Quelude had sum nice multis goin on while JMH were just played Structure: They both had an aight srtucture I suppose Overall vote: Quelude Vote on this man thx http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113596
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02-13-04, 01:10 PM
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dumb guy thought he could stand up to this challenge
saw my rhyme stepped back and lost his balance ^ok this was a weak punch with predictable rhyme scheme wouldnt out shine J with spits if ye wore lip-stick is he holding hotness?nah the kid grips shit ^ok this is a weak punch also..... suprising nobody bites your lines coz all em "fillers" you wanna see pussy take a glance at the mirror ^blah not that creative but i'll give it an ok punch...overall lyrics like un-needed maths teachers coz they sir- plus to requirements this aint no formula one break but i'll have him re-tyreing ^meh best line so far except its a little stretched out there... its like bullied midgets coz he not "up" for this fight miss with my left then your face getting stuck with my right ^agian easy simplistic rhyme sheceme midgets are played ...word your good lyrics unheard perhaps coz each verse is filled with dumb words its like i beat you at losing my virginity the way i cum first ^ok that not a bad line try to stay away from sex but actually not a bad closer... You've got a braveheart like Gibson..but an actor just the same. But Dope is a role you can't pull off..Your casted as lame ^good wordplay a nice punch....good opener overall Let me show you the ropes...start with the one around ya throat there Stand on a chair to get on my level..I'll kick it and hang ya ass in mid-air ^this has been done but its good.....i like it lil played is all While you stuck on the level I attained... and elevated from I'll make you my son..celebrate your birth and death..one verse Son. ^nice nice i like the punches and creativity here...... I got no personals at all for you..you're still just a newb Who talks shit and swallows spit..mouth still attached to the boob ^ehhe ok nice wordplay....good stuff ...punchin consitently Your death will be another notch... for my winning streak Like I slid across the gym floor without moving my feet ^hmmm......well......see this wasn't bad but....meh Dumb kid...from the burbs..trying to make himself Hood Rich Who couldn't "wet" my appetite for a battle even if he could spit ^oo nice wordplay here .....check it quelude took this easy no hate to anyone... Oak already dropped the link hit it up y'alll..he it is again http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114031 |
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02-14-04, 05:53 PM
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Fuck yo couch
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IP: 5138 00E4
Punches: Que, had some nice ones and some weak ones, but better than nothing. Attached to the boob line was weak.
Wordplay: Que, show you the ropes line was dope Multis: J, had 2-3 syllables per line Personals: Neither, none from either verse Opener: Que, opened with a decent punch, J opened with filler Closer: Que, dope wordplay, J ended with ultra played shit Vote - Quelude J you could use some elevation, no played shit, flow is alright. Need much more punches, you only had one, and it was played as fuck. Quelude, what were you thinking with the boob line?!?!?!? Rest of the verse was nice though. Dumb kid...from the burbs..trying to make himself Hood Rich Who couldn't "wet" my appetite for a battle even if he could spit Dope wordplay return the favor in my battle with AK-Mixa
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