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Old 02-22-07, 12:15 AM   #16
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I'd sit here and be super picky about what doesn't sound right to me, but that would take too long to do, because I didn't notice anything at all. This is seriously bumpable as fuck, and if I've ever left you feedback before, you know it's a big statement coming from me...
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Old 02-25-07, 12:54 AM   #17
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Shit's dope man........i'm feelin this........
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Old 02-25-07, 11:23 AM   #18
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this is the Yessir beat I liked...decided to leave it be tho...didn't want to draw Jay references

But...u handle it well...

all elements are good

I focus on flow/deliv. more than lyrics when I critique...And, both of those are well done...nothing major either way

Lyrics, from what I heard, sound well thought out

Hook is cool

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Old 02-25-07, 03:35 PM   #19
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The beats dope, and so are the lyrics. You sound like fuckin Jay Z, the way you're rappin and shit. I liked the 3rd verse the best, but they were all dope. Hook was gay though dude. Idk, it was catchy, but it just was blah. Flow was hot though, so word.

Hurry the fuck up and fucking record for our goddamn collabs you fucking faggot
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Old 02-25-07, 04:15 PM   #20
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HAHA you do sound like Lupe! That's hot tho... Come to Chicago, there will be slight confusion = ).

I don't even know what to say, as in what to work on. Oh my nice flow, and rhyme scheme... K it sounded mad solid. I'm really liking this.
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Old 02-26-07, 10:28 AM   #21
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havent peeped u in a looong time n i remember i used to think u were wack as hell but i see u got alot better.. flow is polished but seriously maan, this shit sounds too much like jay's style i duno if u were doin it on purpose or not, tha flow is good tho im feelin it. tha raise tha bar line is ill, but honestly this shit wont sell to any real heads ONLY bein that it isnt ur own style, skill is def there tho just bring ya own vibe to it
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Old 03-02-07, 06:52 PM   #22
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all yo shit dope, i wanna collab for realz. good shit. 1
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Old 03-06-07, 08:31 PM   #23
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Damn...ur flow is sooooo cold on this joint...reminds me of jay. The hook is nice, would be better with mixing and u could let the beat bump a bit more. U've def been gettin better...I love that line "how can i be so fly and so down to earth in the same verse?!" Good shit, keep it up.


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Old 04-05-07, 02:34 PM   #24
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not really feelin the "feel" of this whole song...not my style....delevery is tight though, flows on, like the laid back vibe in the delevery....beats kinda..ehh, i know where it came from but still, ehhh......lyrics is nice, not over lyrical but fits well w what u was aiming at, overall good song, no doubt...not really my thing though
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Old 04-09-07, 07:18 AM   #25
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does remind me of jay.. but thats a compliment..soo yah pretty sick
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Old 04-26-07, 04:08 PM   #26
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whoa im feelin this tracc son. This shit is straight fire. The beat is dangerous. and the lyrics are Hot. im feelin the fact how you keep it real and not all about that wacc Mainstream shit. this is a hot tracc. definetely downloadable. I'd bump this in the whip. Your qualities gotten alot better aswell. what ever happened with that studio you was suppost to build? triple N sounds nice on the hook aswell. Where'd he go by the way? overall mos' def a crazy tracc i give it

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Old 05-08-07, 09:23 PM   #27
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Damn...this was a hot track man.
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Old 05-08-07, 11:20 PM   #28
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That was hot on so many levels.

Lyrically it was ill. It's got a feel that you could bump it and still listen to it when you need some complexity. That's just ill.

You got that lupe going but i think i like your swagger. It brings something else to a track, that last element that makes me press replay.

I been gone a minute, but i still think your one of if not the best on this site. Alogn with yes, BM and Q, and Trip..but that's all a diff story..

ill leave more feed later..stealin internet...so ill be back..
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Old 05-09-07, 12:03 AM   #29
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this is one of you rbest songs man i loved this track man props!
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