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12-07-03, 02:33 AM
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
thanx^ peeps...much appreciation...
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12-07-03, 01:16 PM
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I liked part one and I liked part two...
I think your emotion showed more in the first one... But this one definately had better vocab and complexity. Plus, it made me want to hear part three, so... Kudos, my man. Except for the forced rhyme on "summit/commit", this was pretty near flawless. 8.75/10 Peace
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12-07-03, 07:51 PM
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thanx for the feedback bro^...much appreciation...
stay tight............ ................................ ................................... peace |
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12-12-03, 05:43 AM
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can't forget bout this. im gonna start on the third one
soon..uppin peace.................. |
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12-12-03, 07:19 AM
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LIKIN THIS PLAYER. THE STORY LINE IS TIGHT TO THE POINT. THEM BUTERFLIES ARE BAD WEN U TRYIN TO CHAT A MINT BIRD THAT U REALLY LIKE
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12-12-03, 02:33 PM
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
^thanx man. word^.........
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12-12-03, 05:29 PM
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Ya Mama's Favorite
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Nice flow to you shit, short and right to the point, good use of vocab and imagry with words..godd shit, decent shit maman
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12-13-03, 06:27 AM
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
thanx man. i appreciate it.
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12-13-03, 10:01 AM
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this was a good verse, so was the first one though, i liked the vocab in this it was really good, your descriptions on things i think were very well done, the lenght also was good, i think this is going tobe a good song once it is done... you going to put it in adio? it would probably sound good there but thats my 2 cents
great verses keep it up peace
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12-14-03, 02:59 AM
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^thanx man. much appreciation....
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12-14-03, 09:55 AM
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good drop...nice vocab and steady flow..good structure and it seemed like it had alot of emotion and feelings in it....great drop overall
9.5/10 return the favour and hit up my openmics in my sig...thanks |
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12-14-03, 09:45 PM
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12-19-03, 12:43 PM
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damn. im still working on the third verse. its hella hard.
............................. ........i got like 2 lines for it so far.... ..........im going for 10...... peace |
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