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View Poll Results: Who won this battle? | |||
J Summers | 3 | 37.50% | |
Jay 286 | 5 | 62.50% | |
Voters: 8. You may not vote on this poll |
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02-25-06, 10:51 PM | #16 | ||||
I don't lose
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IP: 9C2B 06EC
fuck up what....i just want more feed back....is that to much to ask...for someone to explain themselfs?
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02-28-06, 05:51 PM | #17 | |||
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IP: B014 234B
Voted For: Jay 286
Summer... flowin koo.. on the beat.. simple n strait forward... ideas are decent nothing special.. delivery is pretty koo..best part of your verse to me.. punches rolled off decent.. ---------------------------------------- 286... flowin on the beat koo.. gettin up n down into it koo..slipped on some parts... ideas are koo.. good appraoch with some but ended wrong =/.. delivery...not for me but koo..helped ur punches Punches.. came off koo cause of the way u shott'em off.. ----------------------------------------------------- ideas..tie delivery..tie punches..286 overall.. Jay 286.. dude's verse just added up t more in he end.. had a better punch set up which was more effective here which was really the difference..pZ!
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03-04-06, 05:18 PM | #18 | ||||||||
Im Short.Ur Fat.He's Gay.
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IP: 63C3 C75D
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alot of thought goes into my votes. just alot of typing does not follow. I been here long enough to earn the trust of the battler's that I do not Hate or DR. trust me, I might not say alot when i vote but I do take everything into consideration. k. |
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03-04-06, 05:52 PM | #19 | ||||
I don't lose
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IP: 9C2B 06EC
i wasnt discrediting your vote or anything....but honestly how am i suposed to get better if i cant get feedback like what i need to work on...so i try and get as much feedback as possible...like you'll see in my other battles...i took the little you said and used it to get better with the production n hook ish thing...
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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03-04-06, 08:12 PM | #20 | |||||||
Im Short.Ur Fat.He's Gay.
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IP: 63C3 C75D
way i c it....
if u want feedback.....post it in songs.... if u want votes.....post it in battles. believe me...i aint bein a dick. im just voting. which people dont do enough in audio |
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03-05-06, 10:33 PM | #21 | |||||||
Killin' G'z
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IP: 668E 7881
Voted For: J Summers
J Summers: You had a niice beat, I liked it. Your flow was sick, you used some niice rhymes in your track. You used some good punches in there too. It was a pretty sick battle track. 7.5/10 vs Jay 286: You had an iight flow, it fell off in some place. The beat was decent. You went for a pretty long time which was kewl. But your rhymes where steady the whole way though. Had some decent punches in there. 7/10 OVERALL: This was a close battle, but I give my vote to J Summer bucuz he had the better punches and his flow was better. He also used some pretty tight rhyme. Jay you should have cut some of those lines out and used some better punches. Vote - Summers
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03-05-06, 11:16 PM | #22 | |||||||
10:23 till i'm 86
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This was feedback posted for J Summers
IP: F67E 3D56
checkin votes............................................. .
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04-12-06, 06:18 PM | #23 | ||||
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IP: EFD0 26B5
fuckin up this shit sicka lookin at dis bitch..........................comeonenow
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08-03-06, 07:35 AM | #24 | ||||
I don't lose
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IP: F74A 5C03
upppin.....this was my first battle on this site....how is it still open?
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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08-06-06, 08:57 AM | #25 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 13C9 F29E
Voted For: J Summers
Jay 286 - Beat choice is nice...intro is pretty kl, when you get on, you got too many words in every bar but delivery is nice for a battle, real nice...but ure runnin' out of breath sometimes and your flow is on n off throughout...lyrically, nothin yet that made me go damn..or even koo nice shit...michigan line is nice..its gett better lyrically later...lmfao at the 8 mile shit haha nice nice...lol at the dubbinj bit, it gets much better at the end fam... 8.1/10 J Summers I aint really feelin' the beat but the lil hook or w/e it is, is pretty tight..yo u on that cocky shit...u aint rlly got the voice for it...sound outta place..but thats on a selling point..on the lyrics im rollin over the floor lool, Q line lmfao...JAPANESE FLAG LINE haha...delivery is decent..flow is better... Aight Jay 286 - You came nice sir, flow was on n off, lyrics decent, towrds the end got better, delivery ws hot... J Summers - Like I said voice and the way you rappin...on a selling point I dnt think you could sell that...even if u round them gunz like mos niggas (not on here), u still got a color issue with that but dnt let me hold you back..prove me wrong, im jus sayin i aint felein ya voice G..but on this track u came hard...I dnt have a prolem with gun talk thats how u create punches and lay em down..that japanese line is a classic fam...delivery was hot..flow too..lyrics too...pretty much a solid diss verse.. 9/10 Vote - J Summers
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08-12-06, 04:19 AM | #26 | |||||||
The Light
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This was feedback posted for Jay 286
IP: F94A DB0D
just stoppin thru to look and shit. uppin this battle and shit.
ehh
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08-24-06, 03:12 AM | #27 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 6A24 77A2
Voted For: Jay 286
flow nis off in a few parts but for the most part was on quality sucked yea sounds mad muffled lol at literally in the closet its his rappin booth lot of played lines i like your delivery lol at double the lines not liking the ending line was weak summers hook is idk nothig special but adds a cool little effect no doubt you rushed a line lmao at you doubeling your lines word he got you there lol nothing really stood out lyrically quality was alllot better btu its about punches so gotta give it to jay
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08-24-06, 09:32 AM | #28 | |||||||
ILL GRAMMATIX... any other questions?
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This was feedback posted for Jay 286
IP: 142A 9A74
just seeing where dis shyt is at...lmao@y'all being in the same crew...and no crew votes?...lol... i know... it was before y'all was OYD and shyt... shyt's still funny though
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09-04-06, 02:13 PM | #29 | ||||
I don't lose
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IP: 7994 4630
uppin in this peice......one more vote peoples........................................... .............just do it
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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09-22-06, 02:10 PM | #30 | ||||
I don't lose
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IP: 4817 2388
okay lets get this closed i mean damn....one more vote anyone?
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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