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View Poll Results: Who won this battle? | |||
Intensify effect | 5 | 55.56% | |
.Wicked One. | 4 | 44.44% | |
Voters: 9. You may not vote on this poll |
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02-06-05, 09:10 AM | #16 | |||
Banned
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IP: A1EC 8B20
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02-07-05, 08:45 PM | #17 | |||
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IP: 28AD 5545
UUUUUUUppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnn ..........
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...Hit Me Up On The Original Wicked One...
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02-09-05, 08:40 AM | #18 | |||
Banned
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IP: A1EC 8B20
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02-11-05, 02:11 PM | #19 | |||
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IP: B95D B791
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02-15-05, 02:29 PM | #20 | |||
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IP: B95D B791
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02-16-05, 10:35 PM | #21 | |||
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IP: 3240 794D
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnn....... ....Will Return Favor........Peace......
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02-16-05, 11:27 PM | #22 | |||||||
Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: 7C37 5128
Voted For: .Wicked One.
Aiight look.. I dont wanna sound like an asshole, but both of you need to elevate a lot in text battling.. A lot of the wordplay you were both trying to use didnt help any disses at all.. Some of your bars were just useless filler.. WAY too much self glorification.. Intensify you need to seriously work on your structure.. And both of you need to work on multi syllable rhyming.. I'm gonna give this vote to Wicked One mainly because I had less trouble catching his flow.. But seriously man, you need BIG work on punchlines.. And personals.. And basically everything else on text battling.. No hate at all.. It just really wasnt vet material from either.. |
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02-17-05, 02:32 AM | #23 | |||
Addicted
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This was feedback posted for intensify effect
IP: D286 FEFE
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03-01-05, 03:52 AM | #24 | |||
Banned
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IP: A1EC 8B20
upp'in............................................ .............................
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03-01-05, 07:32 PM | #25 | ||||
E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: B1A5 868C
Voted For: .Wicked One.
Aiight, decent battle from y'all, both came pretty strong Wicked ya flow was right on point, personals n punches connected, lines were stretched here n there an had some needles words that could have improved the structure, but ya came with alot more creativity within your lines Good shit I.E, flow was a little choppy in most places, had some witty stuff, but some of ya rhymes seemed a little forced, like you had ta put themm in there just ta make the personal or punch hit, an that made the effect of ya punch or personal alot less than it could have been, ya feel me? still a decent battle but wicked got my vote Return the fave in any of my battles ya see floatin around Peace
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03-03-05, 11:23 AM | #26 | |||||
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This was feedback posted for .Wicked One.
IP: 93C0 D1DD
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Knock Out Stroke
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03-11-05, 01:37 PM | #27 | |||
Banned
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IP: 9302 BD5C
upp'in this shit.........................................
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03-21-05, 04:56 PM | #28 | |||||
...fuck life.
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: intensify effect
all beef aside this is an honest vote....ie got this one, i felt ie-good:liked some of the punches ansl liked the few multies that were in there bad:some of the punches were played, also a lot of the lines were stretched, so that also threw off the structure...didnt really like the opener or closer id rate this verse...5.5/10 wicked one-good: to tell the truth, i felt like this was one of your worst battle verses ive seen, you coodve came a lot harder, the only thing i really liked was that your vocab was better than ie's sry mang bad:i felt like your punches were weak and all played, your structure was pretty badd too, you coodve used multies in their and some more werdplay, sry homie, but this verse wood be rated a 3.5/10 in my bookz.. both-work on ya'lls vocab...the things i thoguht needed the most work was structure and openers and closers multies-IE vocab-W1 werdplay-IE punches-IE flow-W1 my vote goes to IE rtf.........link in sig v/intensify effect |
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03-21-05, 06:34 PM | #29 | |||||
This is my first post!
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IP: 9302 BD5C
upp'in this battle
for my mans and them holla upp'in |
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03-21-05, 06:35 PM | #30 | |||
...Untouchable...
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This was feedback posted for intensify effect
IP: 93C0 D1DD
Checkign This Shit Good Drop Both Of You..........
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