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Old 12-20-04, 08:25 PM   #1
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From: Presence of the Almighty
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my first time too...

racing towards time wit my mind scrambled in disarray
rays of light wit elephants rushing, screamin towards my face
i face the light its truth holding all in store for soul
and tho i'm infront of the sun this journey seems so cold
the long trek by foot to realist points of view
seems to be my everlastin walk thas never through
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Old 12-20-04, 09:25 PM   #2
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From: At the top with a crown
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i'm just trying to put together the pieces to the puzzle
it's been to years but im still just tryin to put together the ruble
That the planes caused and even though i'm not an elephant i'll never forget
that why i can't believe when people don't get why i get upset
but soon i will reach that portal and i will become immortal then i can just live
but i'll still try to grab lightening bugs to try and get the light they give
cause i'm trying to get in the game the express way
so i'm soon to be the the king of the world name A.K.A.
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Old 12-30-04, 09:29 PM   #3
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what i think this thing means

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gods puzzle millions of pieces
looks down at his million sheepis
made a puzzle for man to connect life
might make it might fail on the first try
sets the path and the foundation
you have to choose lifes dowmation
at the end of your puzzle your closer to him
so fix your puzzle to make pieces fit lose sin
skies the limit and nails are in your path
how will you handle it and learn da math
every man takes this path thats why theres no face
we take it too slow or we react in fear of death w/ haste
how many bees are in your comb and how many bulbs light ur fuse
how many seeze the day and how many sit back like the muse
when your puzzle is finished will it be small n have no one to approve
live the puzzle dont sit back to watch pieces you got nothin to lose

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Old 01-01-05, 09:09 PM   #4
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I crossed worlds like a crossword puzzle/
Where people get a screw loose and where hustlers get hustled/
This is the time port of an era of carrying a mic in my hand/
And if you flew like plane you can never land/
I never new once you take off you go higher than planets/
I’m stuck in the diverse world of rapping and I didn’t plan it/
I move like a steam-train with no steam/
It goes on like water but not in a stream/
My mind buzzes like a bee/
My mind sparks like a light bulb that you can see/
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Old 01-01-05, 09:40 PM   #5
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i'm sorry for the free post but i was just wondering if some one picks a winner? or is it just for fun?
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Old 01-04-05, 04:09 AM   #6
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i came to school after playing a game that i just mastered, only later to find out i came face to face with this fat bastard we exchanged words until i got plastered but since then i've been having dreams of a worldly hazard, every time i wake up swearing that i just saw armeggeddon and i truly thought that the world was ending, all the visions of it twisting and bending but only to find out that my mind was pretending, i saw so many colors that they started blending til i wake up in the morning swirling and sweating, regretting that i ever fucked with him so then my sane probability wouldn't be so slim, it drove me to the point where i just rushed home and cried trying to decide,til later when my parents came home they just found out i committed suicide
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Old 01-06-05, 02:18 PM   #7
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From: Cashville,Ten-A-Key
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I'm livin life ta tha end now I'm trapped in a time warps
Now I undastand tha ol' sayin don't live life like a dead corps,
So I'm finally off my ass tryin ta get my shit together
but I can't match tha pieces of tha puzzle up wit one another,
Damn what's goin on am I hallucinatin elephants ain't dat small
Trains ryde on rells An bees weren't dat tall,
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