Am I offline? Cause I’m just off the hook//Look, I admit I ma real rook//Like a 2nd round draft pick//But Lebron James about to get his ass kicked//Hiding in the shadow of “the Next”, I’m the yellow Carmello//Hello, I’m like the Nile River the way that I flow//Ask Russell Crowe, may lack skills, but got “A Beautiful Mind”//My rhymes shatter your spine like Steve Austin's// BOMB ASS OPENER



You gonna get smacked//and if you ain’t aware, you got surprised attacked//raided over the net like the harbour Hawaii//You must be a Post-it note, who’s better, just remind me. KILLA ENDING



DA NIGGA HAD SOME NICE PUNCHES I MEAN REAL HARD ONES//

MIC NICE FLOW// BUT YO PUNCHES DIDNT HIT HARD MAN



I leave cats often, “Lost in Translation”//Hope that one day, I elevate like Desmond Mason//You can’t compete with Asians, slice ya life like Cruise in “The Last Samurai”//It’s do or die, I got a 50/50 chance, you need a life line//Try and kick my punch lines//But you never finish like choke artists in crunch time BOMB ASS MIDDLE

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