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zikio version 2 | 0 | 0% | |
Dope Name | 2 | 100.00% | |
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02-15-04, 01:26 AM | #1 | |
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u from green bay so u must know the packers
ur like ahmand green and Im like the eagels linebacker Im about to hit u wit such great force U gon have to pay an incerible amount of life support I be the bring the symptons of fear and paralysis try to shoot me dogg all ur shots be missin my lyrics are of the supreme the higher u say u got beef but all u got is oscar meyer I be over here bringing the torture my burning lyrcis be bringing the shorchere so now its time to lose u ran out of luck this a bubba in jail moment u been fucked _______________________________________________ yo homie no.. ..this is blah.. ..needs elavation.. .. its to simple and it needs some creativity and wittyness fast but overall it was basicly 5/10.. .. Aw son, I'm sorry to see you didn't learn like you said you did Awfully terrible, and seeing you writing made me feel sorry kid See you're from orlando, don't matter, you still won't beat me Your verses are so simple they belongs in The World Of Disney You keep your secret away? Nope avi clearly states you're gay I study my prey, and so far, you're just one of my daily delays Staying away? Nope once again you're missing the whole point While you hope to be dope, you still ain't on level with a joint You missin' a sig, Like you're not original and sign annonomous You're doomed, with you being the weaker side out of both us obvious this verse is the winner.. ..has more vet quality.. .. you can see the werdplay is more consistent and better.. .. punches directed much better and had nice structure.. .. vote/dopename |
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02-15-04, 05:50 PM | #2 | ||
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Blah Blah Blah, I'm pretty sure that this is my last up and Zekio can start uppin' this too...
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