Voted For: Kordozar

[Color=Red]lol goos shit K good battle
punches- LL he was betta in dis one wit punches
personals- K got dat
vocab- K got dat one to man, work on dat LL
wordplay- LL got dat, hos words flowed man
structure- LL got dat one, it was easier to read
flow- K

my vote goes to K, because of the personals [/Color=Red]

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Voted For: Kordozar

Kord gets my vote, just had an all around better and easier to follow verse...

Lethal, you came decent here, and you know you my boy but you just didn't win this one...You had a few stretched lines and made it hard to follow what you were sayin... wording coulda been better too, because you just had shit mixed up and it got confusing...couple slant rymes, like time/recognized and right/time... you had some attempted personals, but they weren't effective like the daffy duck line.. shit was wack... and ya closer was too confusing.. i understood it but u tried makin too much outta nothing... you lacked good punches... Just shorten and reword ya lines, and come wit better personals next time.. no hate tho

Kord u had a pretty good verse, nice opener..second line was ill, nice punch/personal, next line was stretched but good and easy to follow... good personal next line wit the amtrak line, shit was funny... next line was okay, pretty good but repeated the D/R thing, not a bad line tho.. ya closer was just wack, but it didn't take away from the rest of your verse, you came good overall.. nice punches and personals, a couple stretched lines but were easier to follow than his, and you had good wordplay and flow... so you get my vote

Good battle ya'll, but Kordazor obviously takes it with better flow, punches and personals... decent from both but Kord takes it

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Voted For: Kordozar

ok......

Kordozar...........
1st bar-decent opener...good personal...nice bar
2nd bar- hit pretty good....overall a decent bar...
3rd-hmm ok...not your best...
4th-good bar....hit hard...nice punch
5th-good concept....hit ok......decent bar
6th-ok opener...could have came harder...


Lethal...........
1st-pretty good opener....good bar overall
2nd-good personal....hit good...good concept
3rd-hmm ok....decent bar...hit ok
4th-ok.....decent bar
5th-not good...wasnt feelin it...should have came with somethin harder on that bar
6th-decent closer....liked the concept...but didnt hit all that hard

overall i thought kordozar got this cause of consistency throughout his verse....lethal had some really nice bars...but he also had some that werent so good.....punches were pretty even and so was everything else...it all came down to who had the most consistent verse.....and kordozar did......return the favor

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Voted For: Kordozar

this battle was nice. it actually amuzed me. yall both had some funny lines, and came at each othas neck with this one. but:
LL-u had a hard verse. ur structure was coo, but some lines were stretched, and some lines were left unfinished. u had some hard punches in there, and ur personals were coo. i was lovin em. u came hard at tha start of ur verse, but i think near tha middle u started to fall off, and tha end, u just faded out. but ur closer was amazing, and creative.
kordozar. u had a hard verse also. ur rhymin patterns were amazing and ur punches were lethal. i actually thought u were wack at tha beginning and thought u were gunna get merked, but just how he fell off near tha middle, u picked it up, and started comin hard. and i think that gave u my vote. u closer was clean too, but i think LL took u in that, cause his was more creative and original. that amtrak line was tha peak of this battle, and that really done it for him
overall-no big punches or personals. just amazing wordplay that took it....

AND PLZ RETURN THA FAVOR ON MY BATTLE IN SIG

Voted For: Kordozar

Kordozar:
decent drop from you, punches were kinda hardhittin & landed
structure was a little off though, & made the flow fall in some
parts though, but overall u had a decent drop though. . .no
hate tho

Lethal Weapon (I mean Lunatic):
u had a decent drop also, punches werent really there tho
ur structure was good & the flow was good wit it too...but
yo punches werent really hard hittin & hardly any of them
landed though but to me tho, work on yo punches some more
though. . .no hate tho


-Skriptz

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