Yes I enjoy it, same type of track i'm doing as well. the beat is pretty hype emotional type beat. the hook you did seemed a little wierd but it was to the point and it was pretty inspiring. the verses you did were good, mos def the standing point in your track. lyrics were tight and your flow is very complex and shit I just love it. I like that lil sound behind your hook as well, saying "I wanna be" and shit like that, sounds good. overall i liked this song very good, I thought it was gonna be more smooth but I liked what you did.

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221910

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and look out for my single "Father Heaven"

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aight...the beat is coo...intro is coo...flow and delivery is nice...lyrics is deep nice ish...lol @ the jay line...quality is coo...the hook is catchy...2nd verse is nice, nice delivery and ish...over-all nice solid track fam keep it up.