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Mc KassaNova | 5 | 62.50% | |
illest freestyler | 3 | 37.50% | |
Voters: 8. You may not vote on this poll |
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05-08-05, 12:49 AM | #16 | |
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This was feedback posted for illest freestyler
IP: CA35 5DAB
whacckkkk no offense but you fucking suck................... don't quit your day job.... haha! on tha real tho you had a couple nice punches but that rhyme and flow technique is missin... Take a poetry lesson or somethin to help you out. or juss go buy an em or pac cd. (or Bone) battle me! you set it up.. aftah i win i'll hit u with some more advice iight yung one
~1~ Heres a little freestyle..... First of all/ fuck guns... knifes are more personal/ i don't need no arsonel to disgrace you/ i'd take you outta this place fool, before you could say shoot/ I stay tough, cause sagnasty streets stay rough/ all we 'bout is makin that papah no time for this no skill wannabe fakah/ That was quick with no punches, you want to get ripped to pieces hit me up anytime i'm down for audio or anything~ |
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05-08-05, 01:04 AM | #17 |
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IP: CE15 582A
Voted For: Mc KassaNova
onesided battle... Kas- somma your wordplay is forced but I dug somma it... likewise with multis you tryna string out across a whole line... the syllabic count don't always match up... regardless...the concepts WERE there... and you did a pretty good job on this one... Free- Your battle seemed like your namesake... a freestyle... no complexity or wittyness whatsoever... your punches weren't all that strong... that star wars shit actually reflected bad on you as opposed to dissing your opponent... keep writin, but work on your wordin' n' concepts next time... Vote Mc KassaNova rtf...
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05-08-05, 02:51 AM | #18 |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: D4A7 4BC8
Voted For: illest freestyler
close battle for real strucutre-m punchline-i opener-i ender-i vocab-i flow-m fow transiton-m context-i overall= really close battle but illestfreestyler took this one |
05-08-05, 04:18 AM | #19 | ||
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IP: 3147 6785
Voted For: Mc KassaNova
illest your concepts were played your structure was horrible no good personals here either weak all around punches aint hit on this at all vocab is weak 2/10 mc kass good structure and vocab nice punches here got you this you outclassed your challenger on this dope overall nice drop your punches hit hard and were worded good as well real nice here 6/10
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05-08-05, 11:58 AM | #20 |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: ECCC 37D3
Voted For: illest freestyler
structure-m context-m flow-i flow transisition-i vocab-i humor-i opener-m ender-i punchlines-m overall= illest freestyler came with this one and won it but it was a mighty close fight |
05-08-05, 01:17 PM | #21 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 1F84 1588
Voted For: illest freestyler
votin for illest illest got dis due to a more creative verse wit better punches more creative personals illest- punches- creative fam i was feelin them, very well worded as well Personals- creative n hard hittin fam i liked them man flow- good flow nice and easy to stick with multies- didnt see any, elevate on those strucutre- real choppy try to make more even lines fam good verse overall i was feelin ya flow n personals illest MC punches- jus to basic fam, get more creative, n harder personals- didnt see any be sure to elevate on those flow- good flow easy to stick with structure- good structre lil stretched though multies didnt see any elevate on those jus elevate on ya personals and multies man then u got it made vote goes to illest, better personals and more creativeness n his verse i liked You gonna explode like a supernova cuz mah verse gonna destroys-ya-fast-death * This noobie verse is like a MOSQUITO it just annoys-ya-till-last-breathe** (lol creative n very humerous lol... nice illest) good battle fams be sure to RTF link below sig |
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05-08-05, 01:40 PM | #22 |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 2B27 EDA0
iight thanks for tha votes all tied up and need more votes........ill rtf just drop tha link in here
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05-08-05, 02:19 PM | #23 |
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IP: B40C 6A15
Voted For: Mc KassaNova
kassanova: some of yer lines seem like you tryin to be complex without being good, and some multis a lil forced (quiver in quickness?). a few of the couplets were too uneven as well so didn't flow well. best lines were probably tha angry saliva one, and tha deliver the sickness line. illest: wasn't feelin any of yer lines really. nothin hit hard and didn't get what tha caps were for. you put ** next to yer second line and tha explanation had nuttin to do with it...until i read further on n saw you had ** next to another line....which was wack anyway. flow was off as well and overall tha verse was basic...
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05-09-05, 03:55 PM | #24 | |
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IP: 606D F99A
Voted For: Mc KassaNova
Flow - Kassa, both sucked...badly lol....Kass was better Punches - Kass had me laughin a few times here and there... Personals - Tie...both wew decent Multies - Kass had more...but both didnt really have any Vocab - Both were lacking on this, and need to elevate Originality - Kass...me thinks outside the box...like me kinda...he got it on this Overall: ass won this....illest...stick to freestyles lol jk
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