were we at
the beat is okay,
you need to spit a little louder sounds like you is mumbling a little bit,
the lyrics are okay some good an bad, flow is okay though.
the second guy, has better lyrics, better delivery an raps louder.

struggles
i like the beat, its nice,
first guy, nice voice, delivery is good, flow is good as well, lyrics are good as well.
second, you need to spit more clearly, it sounds like your reading off something?
flow is offf at times but overall its okay, your spit too fast for the beat at times in my opinion.

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