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05-01-04, 10:55 AM | #16 | ||||
Spiritual Respiration
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Meters one easily.
Well let me go down the list. he had better structure, flow, metas, style, punches, should I keep goin? did I leave anything out?
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05-02-04, 08:52 AM | #17 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: 275E DC37
breakdown for STriniBonafide:
flow:i swear people been reading the verses wrong damn nice job here no off spots on through the whole piece nice internal rhyming too 9/10 volcab:good job better then your oppenent here too i didn't see really anything wrong here 8/10 punches:i guess the weakest part of your verse there wasn't really anything over direct it was just vauge lines trying to hit 5/10 overall:22/30 great verse disipte the lack of any real punches breakdown for meters: flow:good job here basic no real internal rhyming to help it along 7/10 volcab:alright use still a level below your oppenent 7/10 punches:this is where you did alot better then bonafide you threw a couple nice direct punches, most were kinda played though best line," mean, my mind is almost as empty...as your fucking win column!" 7/10 overall:21/30 better punches but you lacked in everything else this battle vote--STriniBonafide better all around verse so the punches were weak sometimes flow and volcab mean more if there working as well as his was
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
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05-03-04, 09:29 AM | #18 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: 275E DC37
8-1 meters wins this
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
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