http://community.rapverse.com/showb...499934&posted=1

return the vote plz

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u dont have to right a story but please expain votes!

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Voted For: Typical

Vote Typical,

I call u pepi…cuz ur flow is so skunk/
y’d u test me? Evrybody know I smoke blunts/
Thats my favorite line out this whole battle,

TYP GETS THE VOTE HERE


DUSTY you are to into yourself, ever other line was like IM THis and my flow that, I dunno just elevate and you will get better

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I am Here To Save You All

tryin to close my battles upin for votes

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dats not an explaination. write it again or they might dq tha vote.
which is good for me but if u really thought he won than break it down.
thanx

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upin 4 votes

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Voted For: Typical

Opener - Dusty, lol! so good
Closer - Neither, thoguht both were weak
Punches - Tie, I feel both verses had equally hard punches
Personals - Neither, Wasnt seeing them
Metas - Both had'em, thought it was close...
Multis - Typical, this is because I feel that Dusty was rhyming the same shit too much and I like a variety
Vocab - Both were great
Structure - Typical, I thought his flow was easier to read in my opinion

Overall I feel Typical took this because he had good structure, vocab and harder punches. Dusty, I thought yours was off the hook too, but you just rhymed the same stuff over and over, and dont get me wrong it was dope, but I think typicals were hittin a little harder, no hate dawg.

Very good battle, super close, props to both...

I replyed to your upping with an honest vote/feed, can you please do the same for me... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...t=143096&page=2

Voted For: Typical

typical got this...he had better punches...no personals, which was poor, but he had a nice flow...none of you had personals, but bluntly came wit it...nice flow, nice style, but i didnt like your struture, but it was unique...typical got this one tho

drop votes on the below battles...

keep elevating

Voted For: Typical

Sorry dude but Im gon have to give this one to
Typ. his punchlines were just knockin him out even though both were good
His flow was heavenly and
his wordplay just killed him
Very good battle

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Voted For: Typical

TOO EASY... dusty... ok verse but punches were weak... all of them! typical had way better wordplay but his lines coulda been written better to get a better effect.. hellboy line was trash.. good shyt with the fallujah current event... liked the last line but set up was blah... opener shoulda been worded better... Dusty.... what's "prudery?".... ya choice of words killed you... and ya structure was ugly...

got the point but didn't feel the effects...

no hate... just tough love!