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Old 05-10-05, 04:59 PM   #1
diman
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marv
lol u back again?,i could c our battle aint leave dis kid shook.
but da day u 'Da-FEET' me ppl a start 2 believe in "big-FOOT".
decent open.
prick look!...u been here for a while now still aint got hot quote.
invek's a "clumbsy drug dealer" datz only way he'll "drop-dope".
played.
ya moms is whut u call a junkie,fam stop u get more wack & borin monthly.
i cant lose so if they say "your-up" they talkin bout da "foreign country".
good way to stay in depth.
IN-vektive ya punches r IN-effective u IN-active..whuts goten IN-to you?
ur IN-sane u neva been IN- da booth fukk rap look 4 a job IN-terview.
good idea, bad finish.
ya parents shouldn't of had IN-tercourse,as a noob u was spittin recless.
till U GOT KOED By ME,and did like a "shy dj" and "hide ya record".
ok, i'll take it.
started doin audio's now u focus rite?,nope asshole u aint close 2 nice.
invektive ya 'LP wont work'..n why? u name dat shit a "a BROKEN MiC".*
no.
invektive a thug? nah he's pussy rv u'll find dis head shook in da house.
i dont mean "the ENERGy DRiNK" but u stay with "RED BULL in ya mouth".
haha. good.

*aight, verse was 40-50. most of ya
bars were good, well over decent, had
some comedy in them. some bars just
didnt cut it. but overrall you had a good
verse.

invektive

it may be coincidence...but i think your sig holds a true meaning
Nas holds that number up 4 a reason...its the round your leaving
good way to include the sig. thats a must
he's been texting for years...Marvin's cartoon seems fact now
he never spits over a beat...the martians mouth is blacked out
what?
Marv's verses put me to sleep..his text is my therapy meditator
in rap...your going nowhere...like putting Slinky's on Escalators
ok, had some depth.
son, your not on my level...your garbage; clearly seein defeat
and you couldnt get caught up, even if u put Usher's CD on repeat
why would he want to be caught up?
good punch, but how does this apply? FILLER.

Marv left TE in search to command..but he was put to silence
how can you be the general of a crew...when u have no privates?
decent.
your ranked higher...but we all know Goliath has just got to fall
cause
your chances are like "9's blastin Shaq"..u dont have a "shot a tall"
aight, good finish.

*verse was decent, you came with good
punches and bad ones. you had good
flow the entire verse, which is a plus.
i liked ya style, but a few of ya bars were
simply fillers. so im gonna have to give it
to marv.


vote: marv

good verses yall, good luck to both.

-eph
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Old 05-10-05, 05:30 PM   #2
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he's been texting for years...Marvin's cartoon seems fact now
he never spits over a beat...the martians mouth is blacked out
what?

.....ok.....you know marvin the martian...yea...his mouth is blacked out....he doesnt have a mouth....so "marvs" cartoon seems fact not....he never spits over a beat.....cause he cant....the martians mouth is blacked out....dont vote if you dont get it........


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son, your not on my level...your garbage; clearly seein defeat
and you couldnt get caught up, even if u put Usher's CD on repeat
why would he want to be caught up?
good punch, but how does this apply? FILLER.


he's not on my level....so he's tryin to catch up to me.....


now.....dont u feel stupid.....


IF YOU DONT GET MY BARS.....DONT VOTE....
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Old 05-10-05, 07:05 PM   #3
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invektive raped marv, wow @ d/r
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Old 05-10-05, 09:00 PM   #4
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^^^^ well.....thanks....lol....but its not seeming to help anything....i just dont think they got my punchlines....oh well
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Old 05-10-05, 10:57 PM   #5
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thank god....someone that understood my punches....congradulations...lol...2-1 marv
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Old 05-11-05, 12:31 AM   #6
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lol...the establishment votes 4 the establishment....its nothin tho invektive stop swayin fam u cant explain ya bar's
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Old 05-11-05, 12:33 AM   #7
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lol wow..inekitive..that was hot shit..that sig punch was hot..but i cant vote...marv'll take it as hate..but yeah dope drop too both....u had some dope lines Marv
 
Old 05-11-05, 09:31 AM   #8
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yea.....actually u can explain punches....people do it all the time.....so explaining punches is swaying for votes?....lol.....well i guess people sway for votes quite a bit....anyways...your in TE too.....the last i knew of....and u n red bull r cool....so how is he voting for me just cause he's in TE?...
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Old 05-11-05, 10:26 AM   #9
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lol u back again?,i could c our battle aint leave dis kid shook.
but da day u 'Da-FEET' me ppl a start 2 believe in "big-FOOT".
^^ok, but played wordplay but good flipped concept 6/10
prick look!...u been here for a while now still aint got hot quote.
invek's a "clumbsy drug dealer" datz only way he'll "drop-dope".
^^played punch.......3/10
ya moms is whut u call a junkie,fam stop u get more wack & borin monthly.
i cant lose so if they say "your-up" they talkin bout da "foreign country".
^^omg, another played punch.3/10
IN-vektive ya punches r IN-effective u IN-active..whuts goten IN-to you?
ur IN-sane u neva been IN- da booth fukk rap look 4 a job IN-terview.
^^ok, but this wasnt that effective but not played...5/10
ya parents shouldn't of had IN-tercourse,as a noob u was spittin recless.
till U GOT KOED By ME,and did like a "shy dj" and "hide ya record".
^^forced ryhme scheme, punch was eh..............4/10
started doin audio's now u focus rite?,nope asshole u aint close 2 nice.
invektive ya 'LP wont work'..n why? u name dat shit a "a BROKEN MiC".*
^^nice..........but lots of filler..................5.5/10
invektive a thug? nah he's pussy rv u'll find dis head shook in da house.
i dont mean "the ENERGy DRiNK" but u stay with "RED BULL in ya mouth".
^^eh, ok,......4/10
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it may be coincidence...but i think your sig holds a true meaning
Nas holds that number up 4 a reason...its the round your leaving
^^decent...........wordins a bit off...................5.5/10
he's been texting for years...Marvin's cartoon seems fact now
he never spits over a beat...the martians mouth is blacked out
^^nice, some prolly didnt get it........................7/10
Marv's verses put me to sleep..his text is my therapy meditator
in rap...your going nowhere...like putting Slinky's on Escalators
^^flipped concept, decent.........................6/10
son, your not on my level...your garbage; clearly seein defeat
and you couldnt get caught up, even if u put Usher's CD on repeat
^^lol,.ok, but played...................4/10
Marv left TE in search to command..but he was put to silence
how can you be the general of a crew...when u have no privates?
^^nah, this was wack in my opinion..............2/10
your ranked higher...but we all know Goliath has just got to fall
cause.............................
your chances are like "9's blastin Shaq"..u dont have a "shot a tall"
^^shaq in a rap is played.......................3/10
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27.5/60
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this was a really played battle,both need to up there game
and for every damn voter in this thread...
your not doing your job, count the lines...
mav has 14 lines..........non of you noticed...
DQ'd, over line limit................
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vote/invek

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marv is DQ'd [going over line limit]
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
 
Old 05-11-05, 12:15 PM   #10
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hahaha at marv gettting dq'd!

stupid bastard.......anyway its 2-2
 
Old 05-11-05, 02:17 PM   #11
MaRVJay
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Originally Posted by hotshh!
hahaha at marv gettting dq'd!

stupid bastard.......anyway its 2-2


why do u luv me so much fam???...damm dis korv shit is ya life...
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Old 05-11-05, 12:38 PM   #12
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LMAO nice invek glad to see ya goin to the next round....
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Old 05-11-05, 02:14 PM   #13
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if marv is dq'd 4 goin ova da line limit then he's dq'd 4 not meetin da deadline..rite???
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Old 05-11-05, 02:33 PM   #14
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nooooooo wtf is that, marv was supposed to win, now I gotta recalculate, and I might get 9th degree now cuz you won... fucking ass hole
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Old 05-11-05, 02:38 PM   #15
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s'all good, I got fuxjustaword now instead of marv jay
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