this was a rel good verse had some good personals and had a good flow cant really tell you to elevate good work hommie your a good MC in my books.......




ok now ima bout to battle a kid name oakley,
turn ur ass around kid lyk u doin the hokey pokey,
cuz i already won this battle shawty okie dokie,
bitch im already tired of battlin im a drive to maryland,
u herd i dont hit women so u got a sex change, now ya name carolen,
ya gon break ya knuckles trin to hit me dat hard quess wut...im still standin,
bitch only wanted to battle i looked like a herb wit 3 posts
trust me my punches n punchlines will break ya nose,
this cat lookin for newbs so he can brag n boast,
get over it u lost i exposed u lyk janet jackson's tit,
shut up bitch look who the herb now i jus finished it

WoW u need to elevate in ever catigoir lets put it this way u got served merked and killed.......got to LL and see how shit is done it can give u some pointers and u can see how to structuer your shit if u need any help just PM me thanx ....................
v/Oakley