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08-03-03, 07:13 PM | #16 | |||||||
..A New Breed of Femcee..
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^Wow, Stem, Thanks so much for the reply. Thats 5 minutes of your life you can never get back, and you spent it replying to lil ol' me. thank you. I take every comment to heart.
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08-03-03, 11:25 PM | #17 | ||||
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^Dagyrl been smokin that la la la...
No, I am not named Michael.
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08-04-03, 01:51 AM | #18 | ||||||
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BRANDON..my bad..I dont know where Michael came from.
I won't ask if I can call you Brandy... |
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08-04-03, 02:00 AM | #19 | ||||
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mike is the other admin.
-will edit with a big elaborated response when i get home.. im at my friends now. good peice tho-
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08-04-03, 02:16 AM | #20 | |||||||
"Cuz bruk said so"
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Wow, your work is amazing. It melliflously rolls of my toungue, incredible. I can relate to the piece in major way's. I do enjoy your complexity, the imagery is very vivid and the flow...Melliflouse. You are a very gifted person, I hope to learn much from you... Congrats on the poetry tourney, you really desrve it. I wish you the best of luck in every aspect of your writting... Much respect and God Bless
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08-04-03, 04:01 PM | #21 | ||||||
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aww, thank you bounce. That brought a tear to my eye. Thanks again.
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08-05-03, 01:39 AM | #22 | ||||
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woah. this was amazing. not only did your vocab
appeal to me, but your structure was so wonderful. and the truth behind your writing, it would intrigue everyone. your opener caught my attention and held it as i continued.. i really did love this peice. and i could feel your sorrow.. your choice of words, probably wrote after a break up... or somethin around that area of thought... The loss of a soul mate, a best friend, a lover.. A sadness with a cure i've yet to uncover. im sure everyone's felt a loss like this, and if they havent they will... this truly captures everyones thoughts on a matter like this and words it so perfectly.
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08-05-03, 01:43 AM | #23 | ||||||
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yaaaaaaaaaaaaaay.
Thank you Tikki. I appreciate the comments. And tho "breakup" was an appropriate guess, I actually didnt write it about that..He didnt break up with me, and he didnt die..He's just gone, which is why I had a hard time "defining" the sadness in the opening part. Thank you tho. *muah* |
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08-05-03, 03:48 PM | #24 | ||||||
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clean piece girl, heart felt, deep emotion, that cure ive yet to find as well,keep ya head up and keep writin, tha only cure is time from what ive been told but that sucks,peace out boo.
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08-05-03, 11:11 PM | #25 | |||||||
Special Ghost To Blow
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Once Again Much Props Fo The Tourney You Did Your Thing
Like No Other Champ..Queen...Watever You Go By These Days Double G...I Spoke With Messiah..Any Relation? He Looked At What I Had But Was Drunk Could You Look At My Thread Titled ~Represent~ And Let mMe Know What You Think.. It Flows Fast To All The Commas Hopefully Another Tournament Can Get Going Cause Varento Well Deserving Of A Break.. Hopefully Sand And You Will Be Back Around The Block Again...Much Props And Respect Peace |
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08-05-03, 11:25 PM | #26 | ||||||
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Ay, Diverse, thanks so much for your input.
~Content..Thanks for the accolades, your thread will be the next one I reply to..and um, did you ask if i was related to Messiah? lol, no I'm not but I have mad love for him. heh, "Double G"..I like that.. About the next poetry tourny..I been thinkin maybe I should maybe give someone else a chance to win n maybe be a judge or something this time, if possible..Ive never done that and would like to one of these days. so yeah..Thanks for uppin my thread, too. pz |
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08-06-03, 02:44 PM | #27 | ||||
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^ Still can't believe you got my name wrong.. *sigh*
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08-06-03, 03:13 PM | #28 | |||||||
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Awwww, hahah. Im sorry!! I was young and stupid back then!! No but seriously, Im sorry, it wont happen again..your persona is getting deeper etched into my mind..BRANDON. |
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08-07-03, 05:26 PM | #29 | ||||||
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^'n for anymore replies...
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08-07-03, 05:53 PM | #30 | |||||
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^ In other words... "UPPIN" right? lol
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