aiight i will fo sho and thanx for da honest feedback playa

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KiLlAh BwOy

Aight.. pretty tight from a technical aspect, I can certainly imagine it flowing well.. though id be nicer if you actually rapped it to a beat. Had multies in there, nice rhyme and shit. Ghangsta rap like that ain't really my fav... so I'm not gonna comment except to say it was pretty good for ghansta rap.

Peace.

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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

i felt that shit all the way through...was very nice very very nice....keep it up....u proved u were a killah with that song...nice..keep it up...thats wht im talkin about..THATS TALENT....but try not to rap about guns and killin ppl so much cause u dont live that life and i hope u dont anyways....try rap about positive shit...shit uve been through or seen in the world...let niggaz kno whts up....not bout shit every1 wants 2 hear...bout guns and shit...thats why nas song i kno i can was such a hit cause no1 expected him 2 spit about reality...expected him to spit about killin a nigga or some shit or beefin...so it blew peeps away...try head that direction and u'll see u'll be very respected....keep it up...pce

tru i dont live that life lmfao but my bro duz and my dad lives in the crazy part of new york..but i dun live wit my dad i jus visit him but thanx for the feedback playa!

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KiLlAh BwOy

that woz tight man, i rapped it to a beat and flows tight..
feelin it..thats how we represent.
tha finest... LK

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thanx dawg... LYRIKAL DESTRUKTION TILL I DIE.....all yall otha niggaz cant really stop me

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KiLlAh BwOy

come on yall dont sleep on this

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KiLlAh BwOy

i think the opener started the whole piece off well,
flow and vocab was carried through all the way,
creativeness was nice,
word-play was good,
sick drop..

Lyrikal D's n G's...........Krysis...out....

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thanx dawg.....uppin

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KiLlAh BwOy

thats shit was cool i was feeling that shit but the whole hook thing i was buggin out too....no disrespect but over all fire....1

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hey yo im known to play it low//
dont confuse me with these cornballs on the radio//


ima true hustlah you couldnt fit in my shoes//
my pager buzz to much man my hips are bruised//

faMBa$e Bitch ass niggas Bean Town thats how im doing it....enjoy life make money.....death b4 dishonor
trust no body that aint your fam and fuck that you cant even trust them some times i cant even trust myself lil niggas.....1

ya that was jus sum gangsta hook anywayz UPN

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KiLlAh BwOy

dont sleep on me

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KiLlAh BwOy

that was some ill shit dawg stay up on ya game cuz

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beezy crew fo life
1 love live life
2 the fullest

HOLLA @YA GIRL

beezy crew from life to death
n when I die put the colors across my chest

fo real mayn good looks ...uppin this ma fucka

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KiLlAh BwOy