AAAHAHAHHAHHHHHAHAHAHAHAHahahaahaahahahh.......... ahahahahahahh.......ahhhh....fuck.

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what the fuck^^?

dont worry bout him thts jus the noise he makes wen his ass is getting tapped

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alrite ind of like the beat its pretty cool
speats emotion was cool fitted the track flow was rushed in a few parts but overall pretty good a few2 parts were pretty loud lyrics were cool my favorite song of urs by far
chorus is ok a little bit too loud and i hear alot of hisses
le i just listened to a dif track and ur quality was decent and then i listened to this lol : / idk better mixing prob its not that bad but its hard to listen to lol emotion was dope again but damn ur shit is loud lol re record this :/

overall cool track would like to hear le's shit re recorded buts its straight

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2546163
please rtf

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thanks willa,..

aight i'm peepin now....

Production:This is a classic ass devize beat i was def. feelin the beat fortify right?:9/10

Flow:for speats ya flow has gotten better most def. you had decent change ups and what not but you could up that a lil but it was cool:6.5/10,Limited ya Flow was pretty good you rode the beat pretty well.....it sounded cool:7.3/10

Lyrics:Speats you had cool lyrics good rhyme scheme fit beat aight:7.5/10,Limited i liked the diaper line lol that was funny....real cool:8/10

Quality:this is what ya'll both need too up just go up and pick up a new mic and shit...and i know that ya'll both could save and get at least a dynamic mic from radio shack but its aight for the internet:6.5/10

Emotion:Speats you need too up this here thsi is ur weakness so you should up this a lil bit but it was aight:6.5/10,Limited ya emotion was alright you have got better wit it tho so yours was a lil bit better then speats on this:7.5/10


Pressesne:Neither one of you had that great of pressense on the track the intro and outro weren't turned up loud enough but it was alright......
OVerall:This song was ehh alright...nothing i'd download or put on my cd player but it was cool ya'll are starting too come up mad tho soo keep it up :6.5/10

Keep droppin um fams

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