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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
ryda 1 16.67%
warrior 5 83.33%
Voters: 6. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
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Old 10-07-05, 01:22 PM   #1
Ryda
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uppin............................................. ..
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Old 10-07-05, 04:39 PM   #2
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This was feedback posted for warrior

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checkin pollz...ryda, you need to stop battlin for a while and jus elevate, then when your better. start battlin again so that you might actually have a win or maybe at least a decent verse once in awhile...no hate to either..i woulda voted for warrior but im not gon vote...keep at it both of yall...nice job to both guyz,much respect to both of my niggaz herr...uppin fo this battle...hit me bak niggaz
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Old 10-07-05, 04:49 PM   #3
noname
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Voted For: warrior

Warrior battlen me it's showtime
KO this kid like Ali in his prime
1...this bar doesn't diss him at all...
how u feel..........a newbie is gunna beat ur ass
ur like school on saturday no class
2..this saturday/no class shit is played.
this kids got nuthin on me
with his shitty ass rhymes im on my way to victory
1...weak.....

Ima Rip this person apart. My bars is hurtin his heart.
Make his rap career hit the ‘campus man merkins an 'art.
5..nice multis..decent punch.
We all knew from the start that ima damage ya son.
U read my verse and start holdin ya chest like sanford and son.
4...good concept for the punch but wording was bad and i didn't like how u rhymed the same words
Makin ryda cry cause this site defines ya life.
Make it where RV don’t gotta listen to ruff ryders to hear ryda died
6...strong nameplay here.

Ok...One-sided battle here.
Ryda...
next time...make every bar diss the other guy.Like ur 1st bar,for example...how is saying "U gon KO him like Ali" a diss?The point of a battle is to diss.And the middle bar u had....played out.

Warrior won this for actually puttin out a punch with every bar.That last bar killed it..

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Old 10-14-05, 09:10 AM   #4
BiZzO
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Voted For: warrior

ok man this was an easy battle to vote on..

ryda - your verse was very basic, it was played, no punches, no vocab, no wordplay, and no personals or multis.. elevate kid.. n if u dont like what i say battle me...

warrior - man ur verse was better, u had punches, flow, nice structure, good wordplay and vocab, just work it a bit better dawg, so nice battle for u.. and u get the win easy..

overall - warrior.....
 
 


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