yo dont be stupid delivery is how u approach the punch to amke it hit harder make it do more damage nd sound better aight...... and yea it was a person aight kid im 20 years old and u callin me a kid....etf is wrong wit u are u a retard or sumthin dont get mad for one vote aight kid cuz stanza verse was way better aight so stfu........thnx u and have a nice day......

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Voted For: Stanza

yours overall was better it had better rhymes and was delivered better also i like the last line
his was ok it hadd good punches
but i think you got it

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Voted For: Stanza

first off you bit a ludachris line


with more shit out on the streets then evicted tenants

so you dont get my vote

nice job ass

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Ludacris Line?

Man STFU I Know how his line go his line say

Im Gettin Shit off The Streets From Evicted Tenants .............So STFU and Go Sit down B4 I merk Yo ass .............

my Line is totally different from luda's line ..........

Voted For: Stanza

Serious. I don't like you, I mean you smiled, & looked aroused
When I warned him before the bout he was "Going down"!
^^weak punch....but it was worded ight..so ya get points for that
RV don't want you here. It's over now you're sparring w/ fear..
So I'll gauge your eyes w/ diamonds - so the victors crystal clear.
^^^blah......weak
You'll sea no votes yo, wave good bye to this battle, cuz you're getting sonned n'..
Stans resembles water ..^.. the way when it boils down to it you're nothing!
^^OK....I guess

Ur punches weren't exactly all that hot.You worded ya lines Ok.....that may have been the plus side to ya verse.Ya flow was choppy at points...speccially in that last line.Just make ya punches hit harder.

When I Smack Yo Tongue W/ Oil Was The Only Time Yo Words Shined
Your FootSteps Bcuz the More of You I Take The more I Leave Behind
^^Played as fuck...I heard this a couple times before
Im Puttin Yo Shit Out On The Streetz..... Like It Was Evicted Tenants
They Call Me Breath Bcuz you couldnt Hold me for more Than a Minute
^^^people could hold they breath longer than a minute
I didnt See Your Determination In Yo Eyes Bcuz Im Busy Merkin Yo Face
You Got Light Lyrics The Way They Fill The Room And Take Up No Space
^^^OK.................not all that bad

You had a played bar at first....but it got better afterwards.To me.....this verse was nothing special.Rhyme scheme sucked.But I think your punches had a slight edge to Key.

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Voted For: Stanza

Stanza
When I Smack Yo Tongue W/ Oil Was The Only Time Yo Words Shined
Your FootSteps Bcuz the More of You I Take The more I Leave Behind
Ha..pretty good opener
Im Puttin Yo Shit Out On The Streetz..... Like It Was Evicted Tenants
They Call Me Breath Bcuz you couldnt Hold me for more Than a Minute
Ahh..could have been better..okay concept
I didnt See Your Determination In Yo Eyes Bcuz Im Busy Merkin Yo Face
You Got Light Lyrics The Way They Fill The Room And Take Up No Space
Ha..pretty good closer

Overall nice decent verse..had a couple okay punchlines..some okay meta's..overall keep it up

Keyweezy
Serious. I don't like you, I mean you smiled, & looked aroused
When I warned him before the bout he was "Going down"!
Ahh...naw
RV don't want you here. It's over now you're sparring w/ fear..
So I'll gauge your eyes w/ diamonds - so the victors crystal clear.
Hah..nice
You'll sea no votes yo, wave good bye to this battle, cuz you're getting sonned n'..
Stans resembles water ..^.. the way when it boils down to it you're nothing
Dont really rhyme

Overall vote-Stanza
for having a better overall verse..keep it up

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stanza took this by miles man key u need to elevate

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Voted For: Keyweezy

You got him by a nice little punch line good work I liked the crystle line it was hot.....................

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