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06-05-05, 07:09 PM | #16 | ||||
Light Weight
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IP: 0825 899A
up up up....and away
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06-05-05, 08:40 PM | #17 | |||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 591C A203
this was really good, the style of writing was nice, I liked it, you work well with your style and make it all come together, you have some aspects you can improve on, but overall, this was a dope piece, emotional too I liked it, i'd say 7.5 to 8/10
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