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intensify effect 5 83.33%
Psyco 1 16.67%
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Old 12-10-04, 05:34 PM   #16
Acuity
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^^^^fuk sake i cliked fukin fbak - ill get strobe 2 fukin remove it
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Old 12-10-04, 05:51 PM   #17
The Eruption
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Voted For: intensify effect

This was an overall good batle but im goin to have to give this one to ..........
I really like the flow to both verses
there was a nice touch to PHSYCO flow but it still could have been a little better with the wordplay, Nice sructure to both verses, I.E. had some GREAT line too
i really liked his flow but ur metas werent visible but punchlines were sick
nice battle


-Please return the favor on my battle
I know its a lil weak but its ok
Please return the favor
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=163680

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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Old 12-10-04, 06:17 PM   #18
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This was feedback posted for Psyco

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checking score........
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Old 12-11-04, 12:34 PM   #19
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upp'in this battle.......

enough witht he feed back lets get some votes.....................
 
Old 12-13-04, 08:56 AM   #20
Psyco
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up up up and away for votes lets get ride of the feedback bitches
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Old 12-13-04, 09:45 AM   #21
Die Hard
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Voted For: intensify effect

Intensify definately took this one.
Psyco, You must have an addiction to Skripted Konflictionz
A lil bit mad cuz nobody is listening? Consider yourself Jesus, cuz this is your crucifixtion....2
That line had good vocab, and good rhymes.
You aint even on the charts, you just passed last.....
so now R.V can see how u'r "X' rated" when related to ass..10
That rhyme had good wordplay and flow...
Definately a close battle, but my vote goes to intensify effect..
 
Old 12-13-04, 09:46 AM   #22
Die Hard
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oh i forgot...
return the favor plz
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Old 12-14-04, 09:06 AM   #23
Psyco
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uppin yall playa playa n
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Old 12-14-04, 10:16 AM   #24
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dont start deleting every single vote agenist u dogs i just peep u got 1 vote so far deleted......

but anyways upp'in.......
 
Old 12-15-04, 09:13 AM   #25
Psyco
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ya up up up and away for votes
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Old 12-15-04, 12:44 PM   #26
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upp'in this battle dont sleep ya.......................
 
Old 12-16-04, 02:04 PM   #27
Psyco
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up up up and away for votes
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Old 12-16-04, 05:50 PM   #28
Replay
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yo i was gonna vote on this shit but i think it would be to hard to pick a winners so just checking the polls
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Old 12-16-04, 06:04 PM   #29
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Voted For: intensify effect

Damn Both Of Yall Had Tha Vokab Tha Strukture And Tha Originality Punches 4rm Tha Both Of You But I Got A Kick Out Of This Verse Becuase Of His Wordplay Tha First 2 Lines U Killt That Shit Hommie Everi Thing About This Wass Hot But Mih Vote Goes Ta I.e.....
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Old 12-16-04, 06:20 PM   #30
hang-man
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Voted For: intensify effect

**GunShots hit Mr.Effect**

HAHA..I'm hearin you Bitch, Your more Holy than a spiritual Lift,You should put my verse "between Bread" and "Bite",Its the only way you'll have a "Miracle Whip"::
KANYE WENT HUH>>? WEAK START

No one likes what you writ, even your Avy is gay cause its michel Jackson,I'm tellin you this...No one feels your "Presents in Threads", even if I gave you a "Wearable Gift"::
BETTER

Your about as Hot, as Sented-Preciuos-Candles..This dude would not be able to say "IM Hot", if HOT was his Instant-Message-Handle::
OO THAT WAS PREETY GOOD

His Real name is CRANDLE...lol...what a 50-reppin-scandal, He has asthma & Bifococals, and the only time he goes toe to toe, is in his Precription-Leather-Sandals::lmfao
STRECHED LIKE A MOTHER FUCKER

Fucking Nerd
**Beat switches to 50cents "Your Not Like ME"**

I dont see him or Lable him 'threat', and I'm able to Bet...He'll have atleast one "DiCk RiSe" or "ForHead" Joke, but His Only Connection..is his Cable InterNet::
WEAK AGAIN AND STRECHED

He'll need protection..As my Punches intersect, His silly Rep, But he cant defeat my "Minds Theories" even if he battled "BILLY BLANKS NEXT"::OK BUT NOT HARD HITTING

Fuck Spit or Swallow!!Both..You Suck with Spits...you could Install Toilets on ceiling, and Peeps still dont would not ^UP^ your Shit::
PREETY GOOD

You DumAss Prick....I see your on the right "Track", but you Still getting Fucked up like a Slut-Subway-chick::
Your Like Forensic Detectives with those dusty-prints, your not 50 "GANGTAS DONT BUMP YO SHIT"::
STRECHED AND WEAK

The only time you got shot was for Antibiotics, The Only time you Hold heat was with OVEN MITS!!!!!!!!::
WEAK AGAIN COULD OF BEEN MORE CREATIVE


VS

i've peep ya stuff N notice ya Never won a legit battle, all u'r cheaters take apart-in-wins...
Cause Psyco stay shook in battles, like park-in-sins....1
DECENT START

Psyco, You must have an addiction to Skripted Konflictionz
A lil bit mad cuz nobody is listening? Consider yourself Jesus, cuz this is your crucifixtion....2
NICE

i'll snatch da mic cuz you don’t need those...
I was expecting a challenge but I got a toddler in speedos...3
FUNNY
That posted a verse with weak blows...
cuz His punches are so dangerously cheesy, you would think they were cheetos....4 HAHA GOOD

All the gun talk, been played man, quit actin like you been shot...
Braggin about bein surrounded by chrome, onlly cua ya paps own a rim shop...5
ORIGINAL GOOD

You been hot, past tense, ya skills remind me of retarts who dumb-out...
Got written punches like ya sexuality, it's all still waiting to come out....6
DECENT

Ill Pound on ya chest and watch as it swells into breasts...
No need for silicone tities..Naturals best..Confusing ya family's crests...7
DECENT

I’m mirror hitting Psyco, hes own punches get reflected...
N I'll break u'r mind into thousands of pieces, sweep em' up and keep u'r thoughts collected...8
OUCH NICE

i wanted something like a night-fight but look at this-hoe-u-send...
cuz apparently, you couldn't come off strong with steroids in your deodorant....9
HAHA OO SHIT NICE

You aint even on the charts, you just passed last.....
so now R.V can see how u'r "X' rated" when related to ass..10
GOOD ENDING

PREETY CLOSE YA MADE A GOOD BATTLE BUT I THOUGHT i.e JUST EDGE THIS BATTLE OUT WITH HARDER PUNCHES AND MORE ORIGINAL BARS CLOSE 1
 
 


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