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MARVOLoUsJ1009 | 1 | 16.67% | |
pictureperfect2 | 5 | 83.33% | |
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08-22-04, 07:59 PM | #16 | ||
mess with me get cooked
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IP: 9EF2 7F0D
Voted For: pictureperfect2
YO NICE BATTLE I GOTS TO GO WITH PICTUREPERFECT BECAUSE HE HAD HARDER PUNCHES// AND MARV U WAS GOOD BUT TO ME IT SEEMS YO PUNCHES WAS SIMPLE// YO FLOW WAS GOOD BUT USE PERSONALS AND PUNCHES TOGETHA DEN U BE GOOD AT BATTLIN PICTURE HAD GOOD PERSONALS AND PUNCHES HIT HARD SO THERES GOES MY REASON ~PEACE~ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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08-23-04, 11:54 AM | #17 | |
10:23 till i'm 86
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IP: 3EC9 2F38
oh pm a mode cuz u jus lost 5 in a row and feel another loss comin....... nice
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08-23-04, 11:56 AM | #18 | |
10:23 till i'm 86
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IP: 3EC9 2F38
oh pm a mod cuz u just lost 5 in a row and feel another loss comin....... nice
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08-23-04, 12:04 PM | #19 | |
STiLL Da FUKKiN SiCKEST!!
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IP: C1DA C961
lmaooooo dogg whuts wrong with u u follow everybody record on here...i just wun a battle in elevated da other day...y everybody u battled got less than 5 wins im da first i could see u like newbie votes cuzz u put da post joint da 20 fagget
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08-23-04, 06:18 PM | #20 | |
Light Weight
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IP: 9EF2 7F0D
AIGHT! apparently my vote was dq'd but I really don't see y!
anyhow heres my breakdown opener-pic metas-pic vocab-pic multis-pic structure-Marv flow-pic closer-pic so make this v right here count cause dude won this battle hands down! aight -1- flow
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08-24-04, 02:48 AM | #21 | |
Out-Spoken
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IP: 9588 E886
Voted For: pictureperfect2
if dis fagget nigga talk about killin ppl dont believe he do..... his girl give head & like his "initial's" she drink "pee-pee-2"..... marv....thats a pretty decent personal....i liked it...probably your best couplet pl's a lye ya str8!..even if i was dissin myself dis guy a hate just 5 but you gotta use more "bar's" than "shyne's estate" pretty good punch....that was rather clever....not as good as the other one though....i wasn't feelin the rest of the verse really... dont even need a punch, to drop blood from ya lips I jus wait about a month, fo ya cycle ya pussy bitch good punch line.... Marvelous sayin she “still da fuckin sickest” (title) U a lyer, I can get 19 different people to witness pretty good personal Over reactin is needless, jus cuz i told people u have a little penis Come on dogg, “Don’t let something that small stand between us” very good closer...that was pretty dope.... over all....it was a decent battle....i liked pictures verse more...and he had 3 standout couplets where as you marv..only had 2..i gotta give it to pictureperfect...much respect to both of you
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08-24-04, 05:17 PM | #22 | |
I can rap and stuff.
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: pictureperfect2
marv- pretty good punches, the structure was whack tho.u should prolly think bout typing the whole word out cuz ur shit is real hard to understand and read. some ok wordplay but it wasnt THAT good. my favorite line was the "pee-pee-2" line, good shit.lol.......7/10 pic-real good punches and personals i think. some of them werent that good like the arby melt line was weak but the rest was good. i didnt really get what was goin on at the top but i got the jist of it.favorite line was about "something that small stand between us" fuckin hilarious........8.5/10 v//pictureperfect2
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08-29-04, 02:55 PM | #23 | |
10:23 till i'm 86
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IP: 3EC9 2F38
up to u fagget............................................ .....
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08-30-04, 12:33 AM | #24 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: B6C5 A232
Voted For: pictureperfect2
imma start with marv...nice flow playboi...you had poor structure, but after reading it a while, i seen you had some nice punches in there(just learn how to word them)...your multies was over-crowdin yo punches...like that "more barz than shynes estate", it was nice, but choppy and oversought by multies(which were weak)...i think your a punchline rapper, so prolly try and stick to that...nice rhyming by the way pic...nice flow, some aight personals and punches...but nice shit all around...better structure to me, and thats wut gave my vote to you...keep practicing...you wont win every battle with flows like that holla bac-drop HONEST votes on my battles in sig...people |
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08-30-04, 02:25 AM | #25 | |
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IP: A0C8 44A9
Voted For: pictureperfect2
pictureperfect - nice drop, filled with good flow, on a good structure, nice wordplay use of multies in some places, and some solid punches and personals marvelous - good flow and structure, good punches but words and vocab aint really there for you man, elevate that stuff v/pictureperfect2 drop an honest vote on this battle please http://community.rapverse.com/showb...543354&posted=1 |
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