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A.K.A. 4 44.44%
frein-ma$ter 5 55.56%
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Old 10-19-04, 03:19 PM   #16
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explain ur votes kid^^ .......anyway uppin!!!!!!!!
 
Old 10-19-04, 07:35 PM   #17
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Voted For: frein-ma$ter

Damn Hands Down Ta Frein

This Couldnt Be More Onesided

AKA =- Your Shit Was Weak Ive Seen You Write Alot Better.
The Structure And Flow Was GOod But Wordplay And Also Multis/Vocab Was Weak As Fuck. Come Harder.. Ive Seen Better.

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Even Tho The Structre Was A Little Bit Stretched You Still Came Rock Hard With Your Punches Homie..Flow Was Tight Wordplay Nice And Also Alotta Vocab And Multis'

Good Verse...

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Old 10-19-04, 08:31 PM   #18
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3-2 me uppin for more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11!!!!
 
Old 10-20-04, 05:17 PM   #19
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This was feedback posted for frein-ma$ter

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Again check'n out ya style .............................Up'n
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Old 10-20-04, 08:41 PM   #20
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upping this battle yall it 3-1 him so lets get this closed
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Old 10-20-04, 08:54 PM   #21
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^^^^^^^^^^uppppppp Letssssss Go Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Old 10-21-04, 07:00 AM   #22
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vottttttttttttttttteeeeeeeeee people....uppin@!!!!
 
Old 10-22-04, 06:53 AM   #23
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Voted For: frein-ma$ter

frien got diz
even doh his struycture waz awfdul again, it took like 2 times to read it befo i understood it, but fien had da better puns in hiz verse
much more creatiive
so he gets my vote

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Old 10-22-04, 06:59 AM   #24
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This was feedback posted for A.K.A.

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mmm, good battle, checking polls
 
Old 10-22-04, 03:44 PM   #25
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kkk 4-1 me .......upppppppppinnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Old 10-22-04, 10:02 PM   #26
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4-1 me .........come on lets get 1 more vote in!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Old 10-23-04, 07:46 PM   #27
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From: Trenton 609|look me up bitch
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uppin lololol damn i can't believe this isn't over lolol geter down
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Old 10-23-04, 07:53 PM   #28
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Voted For: A.K.A.

kinda weak battle. both need to come harder than that.

frein master - damn. how do you manage to type your verse like that? i was confused about where lines started and ended. i really didnt wanna read it after the first line. but you had some ok stuff. your opener was weak. and so were the 2nd and 3rd barz. the only decent punch you had was the closer. you had no personals in ur verse. u mentioned his name once but u coulda switched it with someone elses name too and used the same verse. ur flow was off becasue your structure wasnt really good. overall 4/10


a.k.a - coulda came a lot harder than that. i seen a lot of your other battles and this wasnt really up to par. your flow was good and your verse was easy to read cause all the lines were basically even. your opener i wasnt really feelin it. maybe it coulda been re-worded. but it was a weak punch. you tried some personals that didnt really hit but they were there. your closer was kinda good. overall - 5/10


a.k.a wins because he had a better flow, his strucuture was ok and even though he had weak punches they were there and he tried some personals..........
 
Old 10-24-04, 12:54 PM   #29
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2-2 let get it done
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Old 10-26-04, 06:48 PM   #30
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ok you are allowed to vote...........................
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