Timeless the rhymeless coward...
couldn't last ten seconds in his finest hour!
Ok your opening wasgood but i thought i lacked punch. you took personal and flipped it but no real strength
As fluid as milk gone sour, we should talk improvement...
because all the shit you drop is truely a bowel-movement.
follow through seems like a play but nice flip.. good metaphors but lacks direction
I'll prove it.. don't even need twelve... It's embarassin'....
I know you mean well, but you fail in comparison!
alright. not much of a punch though, lacked strength
You should be cherishin', every line that even acknowledges you...
Since its your first time i'll let it slide... no need for apologies dude
punch could have been better here, follow through is alright but the same thing
While I give you a few here's some food for thought.. hope you don't choke
Your punches hit about as hard as arms caught in the ropes!
wasnt really feeling your flow here, follow through needed a little rewording i thought
Until next time we meet bitch...
Assuming that you don't want to retire after you read this!
ending could have been better, fell off flow

Over all you had alright metaphors your flow for the most part was alright, but your punchs really lacked strength i thought. but i could see how you threw your verse together that you had some talent. Nice work.




your new to rap battles, so am i, but theres a difference in us
i've once been on here before,so when I bust i'm battlin under an alias
good opening, nice line really.. not much of a punch though
your just a stupid newby a baby, coz ya still have goo on ya rattle
u have no posts yet on here,so with your first you'll lose this battle
not feeling this bar. weak personal i thought
and tha'll be bad new for you apathy, coz i'm constantly rippin scripts
ya flow is virus, that hits my computers bits to make it trip and flip
set wasnt really anything and your follow through is right he is ill...LoL naw for real it didnt punch
A 50 year old ho is tighter than you, ya need to make an impact
packed water flows better than you do,sorry to attract the real facts
alright bar. the punchs are straight.. Liked your pack water line
you'll get no vote this is no joke, you'll never be this weeks flavour
u contrast trying to be black, when ya still got a vanilla ice screen saver
not a bad bar either. Good follow through i thought but a little choppy, set coulda been a little better
i'm a country dictator a style anialator, i send haters to the traitor
theres no point in finishin this flow his is so bad, so ill finish it...............
eh, ending could have been better.. no real punch. multi was alright

Over all i thought you could have come off better. your metaphors were alright. Punchs were pretty weak i thought, and your flow coudl have been improved.

Vote-Timeless
Barly though, if Apathy would have had a punch or to more he would have taken this battle. It was his lack there of which cause him to lose it. Good battle yall

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