brookz you came alot harder than i expected...i think you took this over born...like gunman said....

ur flow was nice...

born you had some aight punches...but definitely nothin spectacular or win worthy....tsk tsk...shoulda done better..

vote-jbrookz

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Sad, sad, sad...

These riders have no shame whatsoever.

They should be warned, then banned after they do it again.

Peace, RB

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i think niggas are just ridding the dude with over 100 post
j brookz took this easily

Ya sunk like Titanic, <---that's played more than ya porn password...
So I'll smash tha Cristal over ya head, cuz I christen thee an herb.
weak opening to a battle and a very weak wordplay

Don't know ya, but heard ya so affectionate after beatings, ya squirt...
They say he holds his ground, after his dick's been knocked in tha dirt.
very elementary wordplay here

And that's all the pussy ya gettin, so ta tell tha truth, I'm behooved...
Brookz is gonna finally get blown, after he has a couple of ribs removed.
second line if probably the best punchline of this verse

Kid get's flattened alot, like now, so he opened a pizzeria...
And he's depressed so he tried a pick me up, but got a hernia.
Ya overpower subliminal messaging, cuz it's clear ya suck...
Even Cher could slap ya inta orbit, and declare ya moonstruck.
You'll just come played out, probably ghostwritten at that...
Using tha skills of another, not making ME but THEM look bad.
overall: this verse was weak.. only had really one ok punchline in here.. most of the wordplay in this verse was pretty basic and elementary i give this verse a 2.5/10

Born spits "comes out" more [half-assed] than [siamese twins] during "labour"/
Servin him more slugs than Chinese food waiters/
Like "Kleptomaniacs" next to [dope dealers] it's a fact/
His faggit ass can't stop "feeling on another man's [sack]"/
lol.. pretty clever lines here.. tight shit

Fuck his eight to five, him puttin out effort to win this brawl is/
Nut'n new....jes him "workin to get merked like always"/
Like grafitti on documents Born getting signed is evil and fatal/
That's jes defacing the records like putting "Kelis on a label/ (ponder on those 2 lines)
dont really know what the hell your talking bout on those lines but good wordplay

Aint a fight...shit's more like chess when I'm droppin these bombs/
I'm putting dis bitch back in his place like he's one of my pawns/ (think bout it)
Like prostitute donors givin brains this man just keep suckin/
That shit was ass......hmmmmm....someone's been butt fuckin/
nice pretty decent verse here i give this verse a 6.5/10

overall vote.. after reading this battle its clear to me that j brookz took this.. alot of born to kills shit was elementary.. he didnt have any creative lines.. j brook had better wordplay and disses in this battle .. vote j brookz

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iight...

flow was pretty much the same... btk had more harder hittin punches...

thats wins battles... there was some nice meta's from J aswell tho...

btk took structure aswell... it looked so much cleaner...
wivout all them """!£$!"£!"£ <--------- ERGH...

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...571#post1081571

good luck