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Old 05-05-08, 08:49 AM   #16
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na im here haha, in portuguese we in the computer lab
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Old 05-05-08, 01:11 PM   #17
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uppin for votes guys... Aphilly, don't ban him just yet, I wanna get my first win on rv.com
 
Old 05-05-08, 03:30 PM   #18
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lol, ok buddy. u came .w some shit but dont say ur winnin yet. and aphilly aint annin shit
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Old 05-05-08, 05:26 PM   #19
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Quintessential
your opener is good, smooth punch and nice personal. You have a good consistant flow and decent amount of ok punches. I think you could of closed your verse a lot more solid. But its a good personal either way.
Overall, could of been a lot better, but you have some decent punches in there.

D523, first of all. Fuck off with the bold text. We all know what a multi is, you have no reason to bold your rhymes, its looks fucking wack as fuck and pisses me off when Im reading your verse.

Your openers shit, good attempt at a personal but you didnt pull it off too well.

Little Rookie…If You Think You On My Level Not Even, Ill Leave Your Heart Bleedin
Soon As You Stop Breathin, You Start Seein A New World In Hell Without Gods Teachings

This is just one big boring ass filler with bolded rhymes.

Your last two punches are what took this for you.

good battle
 
Old 05-06-08, 09:07 AM   #20
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uppin this for votess
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Old 05-06-08, 01:03 PM   #21
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^^ Cheating Fucking Faggot, Your A Fucking Queer, Get The Fuck Off The Board You Lame Ass Fucking Dick Sucking Queer Of A Faggot
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Old 05-06-08, 08:33 PM   #22
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woww still on the shit talkin thing i see. That's good, battle me or shut the fuck up. thats all i can say
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Old 05-07-08, 08:42 AM   #23
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^^ so that way you can just make up ANOTHER account and vote for youself? your fucking whack dude.
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Old 05-07-08, 12:28 PM   #24
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it aint even like that faggit, but dont take up space on my battle thread to talk shit
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Old 05-07-08, 11:16 PM   #25
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so what is it like you? YOU CHEATING MOTHER FUCKER
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Old 05-08-08, 02:28 AM   #26
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if you didnt bite this from another site,
its a decent verse, creative,your punches hit harder then his..
i doubt you wrote it but you get the win..
quintessental your verse was alright,decent vocabulary i liked how you rhymed capillary with vocabulary,i did that in some of my older shit..i felt like your verse was more of a filler though your punches really didnt hit..
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Old 05-08-08, 11:59 AM   #27
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why thefuckiseveryone doubting i write my shit. LISTEN the fuck up RV,i write my shit. u heard me?
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Old 05-08-08, 12:24 PM   #28
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^^ cuz your a fucking cheat you faggot
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Old 05-08-08, 07:23 PM   #29
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lol, this little bitch is STILL on my dick. E-GANGSTAA watch out!
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Old 05-09-08, 09:00 AM   #30
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^^ whats that? is that a cheater i hear....awwww yes, yes it is.
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