atleast i show everyweek ..................aint like i leave yall hangin or nuttin but its aii ....nothin but the net

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*Bridging The Rap*

Stanza Productions *Dem City Boys*

^ Oh no doubt. You'll improve over the weeks most definitely. I'd rather have a person who shows every week and improves gradually, than someone who is dope right now and unreliable.

Some tips though:

Don't capitalise every word, it looks awful.
Stop using so many ...............'s, it looks awful also.
Stop stretching your wording so much, example:

Man You Crew dont run Deep Nigga Yall Niggas Is lame
If So I'll Take The Flame and Burn Yall Nigga's
.............................................Till You Be Yellin One Blood Like Game

Your crew don't run deep dude, all ya'll bitches are lame
I'll take the flame 'n burn ya...till you be yellin One Blood like The Game

Also, try and relate the setup to the punch. Like so:

Ima drop fire in this battle, be straight beating ya lame
^ I'll take those flames 'n burn ya...till you be yellin One Blood like The Game

word....Same shit with me...Im at a different level now then when I first came on this shit. it just takes time and a good awareness of what you are doing and how you do it. Just work to get better at it and dont be afraid to try something new man.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

can i get my chyper award please :/

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GBA Champion

Axe

just tryna keep you motivated so we can rematch..................
i know you wanna avenge your self no?

21. Gho$t Wrighter (0-0) vs 22. Sizzle (0-0)

Neither voted, both lost. Ironic that they were bitching about getting no votes.

lmao my bad

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KILLER HOOOUSE > YOU

^ I was talking about in the battle. And dude, stop trying to make me look stupid at every attempt possible. It's getting really fucking annoying.

Word tell him kempo... dunno why he actin stupid for anyways

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so what.. were just gonna no show this week?

pfftt..

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good mag, sorry for not voting n stuff.

lol, I only see like 3 battles that actually went down this week

I was just cruisin' around the net... the PBRA is on a short hiatus, RM had a shitload of no-shows this week, RB had a shitload of no-shows this week...damn, i don't know whats going on, the no-show problem isn't just at this site.

Word, it's just a bad month and stuff. Everyone's starting school or college again, so they're focusing on that. Then when they realise they can't be fucked, they'll start showing again.

sorry i was planning on trying this week, but i didnt lol

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