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Old 01-27-06, 03:26 PM   #1
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ok..da lyricz is str8 on hea got sum nice lines but othaz were kinda eh nahmean...flows coo...deliverys aight could've been more consistent thru out da track tho...overall dis was ok nahmean...
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Old 01-27-06, 04:51 PM   #3
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put a beat, it could be more fun, nice lines, flows not bad, sometimes you sound like your tryin to say big words
good track
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Old 01-27-06, 07:26 PM   #4
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edit: i fucked up on this psot my bad
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Old 01-27-06, 07:32 PM   #5
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thanx for the feed everyone
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shit really wasn't broken down in bite size pieces for the idiots that call them selves hip~hop artists... Had a nice use of an extended vocab in this...


lol ok cool was just wondering what u meant

to be honest i'm not gonna put a beat to this ...i did but i wasnt feelin it so....
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Old 01-29-06, 08:56 PM   #6
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its str8 for accapella iono..i wasnt realli feeling maybe its not my type of stuff....to random for me to like....but funny none the less

thanks for the Feed on my track u gleave me feed and ill Return the Favor aight
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Old 01-30-06, 11:28 AM   #7
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yeah no prob man thanx for the feed
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