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Old 01-24-05, 04:38 PM   #1
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This was a pretty decent peice. I liked the first verse and the hook alot.

The 2nd verse started amazing. The fish bowl visual is nice. But then it trailed off.
3rd Verse was solid, with a few gaps in flow.
Emotion was everywhere...


Good Peice.
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Old 01-24-05, 10:30 PM   #2
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thanx for the feed people uppin for some more
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Old 01-25-05, 01:10 AM   #3
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Old 04-29-05, 01:17 AM   #4
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Resembles the pink floyd song, dope piece overall man, good vocabulary and some ill emotion in your lines, i look forward to that topical..pc
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Old 04-29-05, 01:56 AM   #5
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hey man i like your taste in music....Pink Floyd, what a classic...Wish You Were Here.....i love that song, btw that song inspired me to write this some what.....i didn't think this would get any feed...well atleast now.....but i apparently forgot to take the link out my sig a LONG ass time ago lol well hey tahnx for the feed....uppin? lol
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