I say in he'd dopified....and a beaut of a piece......

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alright. if emotion seems to be what matters. yall should consider putting evolves piece "merry christ missed" in.

^You missed the point, Feeble (well, if that is an actual real swipe at what's been said). But everyone has their opinions n what not.

nah i got your point. . thats why im suggesting evolves piece also. . did anybody else read it? it was about the true meaning of christmas. its good,.

i just started reading and replying to all the poems in there. i see what you mean perfectly now. even the newbies to poems in there usually have great emotion.. your forum won itself a fan.

I thought that evolves piece was a great thought and very true with society now days..Should it be in legends?...i dont believe so..only because it could have been written with more depth.. I think evolve even said it shouldnt...ohh well...

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Do you have a link to evolve's piece?

And yeah, some of the 'newbies' do come straight into it with so much. But that's probably cos poetry is more 'free' than open mic (yes, i used to do open mic and rap, so it's not based on ignorance). And it's also in a way, simpler and easier to grasp.

Open mic can at times be a more complex 'branch' of poetry. Depending on which way you look at it. And of course, you learn a bit about how to write poetry n what not at school (i think). Whilst 'open mic' isn't.

Though once again, both can go hand in hand too.

i think all of them take practice. poetry more so to show your emotion, and come with a topic people will relate to.

^Depends on your perspective i guess. But overall you can drown much more easily in open mic (rap in general) than you can in poetry.

Though, like you said, it is just as hard to write a piece of poetry than a piece of open mic too. But that's much more the case at 'higher' level. And much less so on the lower levels.

But that also depends on bluntness and brutality on circle of people reading your pieces.

It's all good though. Especially as we're straying further and further away from Twizzle's actual piece (well, kind of anyway..)..