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Old 11-18-04, 12:00 AM   #16
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I'm DOwn.............
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Old 11-18-04, 12:06 AM   #17
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all yall should just jion pink you get money respect and a free t-shirt
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Old 11-18-04, 12:11 AM   #18
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Thumbs up You said tryouts be here

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Im down with this crew you let me in and feel my deep, educated words. Big ups for the welcome and if i have to spit a little to get in this one goes to Spence.

Chorous:

Bring it back slow. Feel the rhythm of life
Bring it back slow. Writing for he who took his life.
Bring it back slow. The day i heard was in shock.
Bring it back slow. The only injustic was no one could say stop, rock.


Life is hard and full of struggle.
Its hard to look at the yearbook and not stumble.
Playing football backyard and in the street.
Working McDonalds making your keep.
Economic status never kept you down.
Smoking trees to get high and now your stuck in the clouds.
Use to talk and do the walk at the high school dances.
Now i put up a bottle of jack and pour the glasses.
This ones for Spence, so go to the court and shoot a hoop.
Kid went state straight out of duluth.
Now death and shock hits all those who heard.
I was straight friends with the kid but not close,
But the kid who said hi and stayed back with pose.
Faught the internal struggle and lost his self
Im pissed and angry that he hanged himself
Crazy, messed with my mind
kid and family suffered yet there was no crime

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The day was november 8 2004
My cell phone rang and found my buddies news just gave me a tore
Saw no signs of apathy or neglect
It was Spencer never saw him tense in front of the crew
Night was late and i was gonna play poke
Thought hell no man must be some kind of joke
Cant see it but im crying on the inside
Think of mom and pops feeling left dying and detective
Dont get angry at me for saying my perspective
Looked up ti him for the bball, football, and everything he did.
Candles touched the sky trying to give him the guide
Father give him guidance as the peeps in the ghetto dropped their guns.
The struggle the ghetto gave was hit right back in the face.
People bowed their heads and thought of his grace.

Chorus:
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Old 11-18-04, 12:16 AM   #19
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dont show me that i wana see how ur punches work^^^ drop a 6-8 line battle verse plz
oreo na we startin somfin here cant u see....lol nice try

and Ult i say u in but u need a lil work but we'll fix u up quick no hate u in

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Old 11-18-04, 01:05 AM   #20
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Thumbs up BAttle

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Im in a good mood your food for the father.
You rap hood but all i see is short sleeve.
Your crew wear G- Shirts but cant weave
I crosche and mix mash your strings.
Stab you in the eyes with my hooks.
Even your mom sees she gave you her dirty looks.

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Old 11-18-04, 03:54 PM   #21
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^^I say you not in but we'll see what street thinks
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Old 11-18-04, 06:13 PM   #22
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i say u in man....aight umm just rep the tryout thread until shit gets started......
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Old 11-18-04, 08:03 PM   #23
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Thanks playa

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yo thanks for letting me in the group. Im challenging some peeps at 10. Ill rep it right. Im very active in this forum.
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Old 11-19-04, 01:44 PM   #24
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ahm flowin bad silables...
flows shows my punchs blows...
fast so smooth so critical...
mah uppercutts daisin shatter
ya stance...
winnin me better study ya chance
ahm like a shadow at night ya never
get a second glance ahm to fast
snapback reaction to slow ahm slitin ya gulet
ahm tha type of cat to rap an snap ya jaw
wit 1 2s an 13s punchs lines
knock ya fuckin teeth to tha floor
fuck this ahm pickin up win fast..
ya chances agesnt me is slimer than snoop dog
on slim fast bicth dont fuck wit me ahm hazardous
not even you can step to this

aight it aint much but ahm gettin better
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Old 11-19-04, 02:27 PM   #25
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^^Yo Kid You Need Elivation
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Old 11-19-04, 02:53 PM   #26
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aight but thankz how can i get help
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Old 11-19-04, 02:54 PM   #27
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Look At The Tutorals
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Old 11-19-04, 02:59 PM   #28
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thankz playa aint been battlin long only like 3 weeks
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Old 11-19-04, 03:57 PM   #29
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yeh i say elevate...umm just start doing ya thing in cyphers and shit and eventually you'll get the jist.....

and B.Wall yeh its strait u in just work on ya shit a lil man...like try doing multi's and shit it helps ya flow
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Old 11-19-04, 04:54 PM   #30
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ahm gonna do tha then come back when ahm better ab shit
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