Voted For: calamity

cal- good personals and nice wordplay through out the verse, u had nice punches that hit and no stretched lines
sonic- some of ur lines were stretched but u did have some nice punches and a couple personals but calamitys jus hit a little harder
v/calamity

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First of all, i'm not stupid. this is getting closed mos def. he voted on both of ya'll battles and you guys are returning the favor, plus ya'll never vote on my other shit, so these were not Vet votes.. i don't usually care, but he said that he only wanted Vets to vote, they're giving the type of explainations people give when they're returnong favors, plus, you Still request votes on the battle when i told you that my box is broke.. it ain't fair, because time is a factor, i could of had won by now for all we know.. i'm coo, there's no middle ground to meet on, too many restrictions on voting..

how is that even possible... calamity deserves to beat you sonic... any decent mc can tell that his verse was better quality than yours... the punches hit harder... its obvious you didnt come ya hardest, but dont be sore... just accept the loss, n if you really feel raw about it, battle calam again n come harder....

no hate

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Voted For: calamity

SONIC

This dudes young and poor, Vegetables Is your only "Salary"
It's Sad to See, But every verse you write is a true "Calamity"
->>first line was hot after i got it...second line was weak...he predicted it in his verse

This is Higher than Music man, the Fire is Fusin
U're like a long distant runner in last place, u'r "Tired" of Loosin
->>not feelin this punch...just too much of a stretch

I'm Still Smart you're Still Dumb, you Still Lost, I Still Won
U couldn't even beat me in a battle me if u had a Real Gun
->>haha good punch

Just listen to me ya'll as I spit This Truth
Ya name was "Hoops" coz MC's rap circles around u In Booths
->>weak...

Wit Weaker Raps, U Peak where I Emmerge At
U'r So garbage that when yo tape plays, the Speaker Cracks
->>decent punch...weak rhyming brought it down

When I throw Acid, u can't fight Back wit Spit
Oh, did u tell them U'r addicted to "Crack".. Ass Crack That Is
->>hah i liked this punch

From these Lips I Bust the Sickest Stuff, U should be Givin Up
U'r "Record's" more fucked up than discs that Skip too Much
->>ehh...decent

My shit is Hot and Scorchin and I'm leavin you In Torment
I knock out teeth, have u wearing more wires than Informants
->>haha

This is the main fuckin reason that I kill Fags
Calamity's like Lesbian Studs, he'll never be a "Real Man"
->>no...

If u ain't prepared for battle, you really should Surrender Then
Or i'll just send you "home" faster than Rickey Henderson
->>home plate or back to the minors? either way pretty good closer



calamity

36-1, not ne more, cause im bout to leave ya record image buckled..
howbout you better high "TAIL" it SONIC, cos im introducin my KNUCKLES..
->>knuckles punches on him are like one more battle from played but you got in under the wire...decent opener

he prolly lookin for posts of me saying shit in an outdated place..
battling me aint safe like mouth washing with razor blades..
->>first line was mediocre but i liked the punch

im tellin you, honests my word, this cat really gets hurt with the verbs..
Im bout to leave him street smart, like i cracked his skull on the curb..
->>haha I was feelin this punch

Im bout to leave his verse broken, like i was attackin his limbs..
Iv seen better punchlines spawned from the back of my timbs..*
->>i didnt get this punch...it will probably be obvious when i see the star after i vote but i didnt understand it

like you that white chick kobe banged,you fightin wit false "blows"..
nigga got more name changes than peoples thoughts bout mikes nose..
->>haha nice

i've seen your material, its not cloth, its totally crap..
droppin ya lyrics like a turd in bathrooms,but the toilets just toss em back!..
->>hah pretty good punch

you prolly gonna throw a punch like "you drop real calamitys"..
blowing holes in ya verse, like i was yo simmity sam with this..
->>wouldnt have been funny except he did...cleo is that you? ehh second line was fillerish

this "sucker" cant "spit" at all... cos hes up performin fucks n fellatio..........
sonic aint tryna battle... all this bitch wanna do is increase his dick to but ratio.... ???
->>weak closer

This is one of those flip a coin type battles...very nice from both sides

Sonic you had like a nice...weak...nice...weak pattern thing going on in your verse. You had some creativity going on in there which was cool. Some of the filler in there dragged your verse down and overall just not enough of your punches connected for the win here

Calamity you had some funny shit in there and there were some holes but overall you edged him out..i like your style. Some of the wording couldve been better but I saw where you were going with all the punches except the one i said I didnt understand. closer fell off the map but it was pretty cool overall.

Nice verses from both sides here both of you keep up the good work.

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^if you wanna drop a link, its coo.. i'll drop an honest one if one of your battles..

* = Timberlan is a boot...and you DONT kick with boots... im sayin iv seen better punches spawned from a boot..hehe boots dont punch at all ..

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Voted For: calamity

sonic

This dudes young and poor, Vegetables Is your only "Salary"
It's Sad to See, But every verse you write is a true "Calamity"
decent start

This is Higher than Music man, the Fire is Fusin
U're like a long distant runner in last place, u'r "Tired" of Loosin
nice..

I'm Still Smart you're Still Dumb, you Still Lost, I Still Won
U couldn't even beat me in a battle me if u had a Real Gun
umm noting was hard hitting here.....

Just listen to me ya'll as I spit This Truth
Ya name was "Hoops" coz MC's rap circles around u In Booths
decent

Wit Weaker Raps, U Peak where I Emmerge At
U'r So garbage that when yo tape plays, the Speaker Cracks
preety decent.... but the flow was eeeh...

When I throw Acid, u can't fight Back wit Spit
Oh, did u tell them U'r addicted to "Crack"..
if u ment ass-crack good if u ment crack-drug its weak....

From these Lips I Bust the Sickest Stuff, U should be Givin Up
U'r "Record's" more fucked up than discs that Skip too Much
ok...

My shit is Hot and Scorchin and I'm leavin you In Torment
I knock out teeth, have u wearing more wires than Informants
this was decent but i herd that last line befor...

This is the main fuckin reason that I kill Fags
Calamity's like Lesbian Studs, he'll never be a "Real Man"
i like the 2ed line 1st was a weak set-up


If u ain't prepared for battle, you really should Surrender Then
Or i'll just send you "home" faster than Rickey Henderson
ok finish..

not a bad verse but i think ya punches kinda lacked a little bit but all around still good... 7.5

calamity


36-1, not ne more, cause im bout to leave ya record image buckled..
howbout you better high "TAIL" it SONIC, cos im introducin my KNUCKLES..
ha nice ,

he prolly lookin for posts of me saying shit in an outdated place..
battling me aint safe like mouth washing with razor blades..
decent

im tellin you, honests my word, this cat really gets hurt with the verbs..
Im bout to leave him street smart, like i cracked his skull on the curb..
preety good, but i herd that last line efor but still good

Im bout to leave his verse broken, like i was attackin his limbs..
Iv seen better punchlines spawned from the back of my timbs..*
preety good,

like you that white chick kobe banged,you fightin wit false "blows"..
nigga got more name changes than peoples thoughts bout mikes nose..
haha nice...

i've seen your material, its not cloth, its totally crap..
droppin ya lyrics like a turd in bathrooms,but the toilets just toss em back!..
preety good,

you prolly gonna throw a punch like "you drop real calamitys"..
blowing holes in ya verse, like i was yo simmity sam with this..
nope dont flow,

this "sucker" cant "spit" at all... cos hes up performin fucks n fellatio.......... sonic aint tryna battle... all this bitch wanna do is increase his dick to but ratio.... ???

good ending...

nice tight battle and all but i have to give this to calamity
he had better hard hitting punches and was more clver in hes verse.....

nice battle

but what if you put the boots on your hands? then your punch would be SONNED. heh jp can you hit one of the wack battles in my siggy that I cant get closed. thanks.

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Voted For: SONIC

sonic: damn this was a Hot verse from you..Sick structure every line was on point..your flow was decent..good wordplay i liked that opener it was real decent...didnt see too many personals but da punches were bangin hard...nice shit....ur vocab was decent..overall nice shit

calamity: u might of took this except u lacked structure flow and vocab..ur punches werte hittin hard...ur flow was alrighjt...ur personals..didnt see too many...vocab...didnt see alot either......wordplay..was there..it was nice...overall: this was a sick verse but u lost due to vocab structure and flow

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lmao sun^.. shoud be 3-1.. but the dude didnt vote right so its 2-1.... uppin

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i didn't lose yet, plus, I have different opinions.. that's why i have different style then him, 95% of the people styles on here i don't feel, and a lot of the punchlines are back pack.. not talking about Calamity but in general. you obviously saw something that i did not see, doesn't mean that i'm not a qualified MC (Master of Ceremony)... He could lose for all I know, I a;way enjoy my my Lines better, biased, but i do.. they aren't always a+, yet they are always off the top and original, no matter if someone happened to say it before or not.. if he does win, big ups, but you can't dictate everyone's opinion and state that if you don't pick Calamity'sw verse, then you're not an MC.. Decree Wun has a beautiful record and good skills and hoe picked me.. that's really my biggest point, you know what i'm sayin, i can afford two losses, it ain't that..

Voted For: SONIC


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Voted For: calamity

Aight for sure i think clamity got this here..

howbout you better high "TAIL" it SONIC, cos im introducin my KNUCKLES..

^^ DOPE lol gave me a good laugh and right of the start..
And dope closer haha overall it was a pretty funny verse from you.. good wordplay punches and personals.. flow was alright..structure could be better but w/e

Sonic i wasnt feelin your opener.. though it was alright.. clams was better..

I'm Still Smart you're Still Dumb, you Still Lost, I Still Won

^^ Was not feeling that line..
Actually i wasnt really feeling your verse at all.. youve done better before.. just not your battle today.. You had some alright punches.. your whole verse was lacking the intensity... it was more like Ill do this and ill do that.. you cant even up to me and shyt like that.. no real outstanding punches..

Overall Clam got this battle.. it was alright by both but clam edged it out

Voted For: SONIC

Ill..probably one of the illest battles i seen in a while. Both Mcs came with hard punches and good metas. In my opinion though, Sonic came with it a little harder. Rickey Henderson line was tite, and actually like statin his name in the personal when he hit him with the name change. I saw a name change punch in calamitys too, but he didnt state datruth29 whereas Sonic actually made a personal out of it with the name hoops. Good shit though. Structures were on point, almost everything was even. Metas were on it, everything. Sonic just came harder with punches and a little more metas. Sonic gets the vote. Good battle...I like it.

Vote-Sonic

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